Results 1 to 3 of 3

Thread: An odd poem.

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Jan 2002
    Location
    Riding my bike somewhere...
    Posts
    26,408

    An odd poem.

    I just wrote it, it's kind of odd.. in a creative way?
    I guess. Read on;;

    my eyes seep
    watered with confusion
    tears of which their beginnings are lost
    in whirls of my mind


    i loathe him
    i loathe her
    the words have no truth
    yet they say them as if they do
    throw them at me, like it means nothing to you


    i'll tell you to shut up
    if you continue to speak to me
    i don't like your voice
    it makes me want to scream


    if you don't go away
    i'll be forced to vomit
    because your face makes me sick
    insane, crazy, ill
    not because lack of beauty
    you were beatiful until
    until your words were spoken
    next to your picture in my mind
    in a caption they are written

    soon they'll be blotted out
    as the tears wash them away
    until you speak again
    and i'll tell you to shut up.

    ~Kay, Athena, Ace, Kiara, Mufasa, & Alice!
    "So baby take a axe to your makeup kit
    Set ablaze the billboards and their advertisements
    Love with all your hearts and never forget
    How good it feels to be alive
    And strive for your desire"

    -rx bandits

  2. #2
    Join Date
    Oct 2001
    Location
    Iowa!
    Posts
    13,130
    Who did you have in mind when writing this? I would hate to be them

    9/3/13
    I did the right thing by setting you free
    But the pain is very deep.
    If only I could turn back time, forever, you I'd keep.
    I miss you


    I hear you whimper in your sleep
    I gently pet you and say, no bad dreams
    It will be alright, to my dog as dark as night.

    Fur as dark as the night.
    Join me on this flight.
    Paws of love that follow me.
    In my heart you'll forever be.
    [/SIZE]



    How I wish I could hold you near.
    Turn back time to make it so.
    Hug you close and never let go.
    11/12/06




  3. #3
    Join Date
    Jan 2002
    Location
    Riding my bike somewhere...
    Posts
    26,408
    It could honestly be referring to alot of people, you not being on of them, of course. I didn't really have anyone in mind while writing it

    ~Kay, Athena, Ace, Kiara, Mufasa, & Alice!
    "So baby take a axe to your makeup kit
    Set ablaze the billboards and their advertisements
    Love with all your hearts and never forget
    How good it feels to be alive
    And strive for your desire"

    -rx bandits

Similar Threads

  1. Poem
    By Craftlady in forum Cat Memorial
    Replies: 13
    Last Post: 03-23-2004, 09:23 AM
  2. Poem
    By GoldenRetrLuver in forum Dog General
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: 10-16-2003, 09:06 PM
  3. Really Sad Poem : (
    By ILoveMyAbbyGirl in forum Dog General
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 11-29-2002, 07:27 PM
  4. A Dog (poem)
    By wolf_Q in forum Dog General
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 11-06-2002, 01:48 PM
  5. Poem
    By RockyRoad in forum Dog General
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 10-26-2002, 08:49 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Copyright © 2001-2013 Pet of the Day.com