What do you think of this poem?

[lv4dogs]

New problem, I have this on microsoft word and the background color is not printing on my computer. I triple checked the setting and it is set for color & to print the background. I don't know what I am going to do now. Anyone know of any other programs I can transfer this to that has some sort of color or pictures available to be used as the background?

As some may know I lost my wonderful grandmother yesterday afternoon. I am trying to do a poem for her service, but my mind is boggled, my time is limited and it's been a long time since I was in school I am not sure if I remember the "proper" way to do a poem. This is a lot harder on my than I thought.

UPDATED VERSION!
This is what I have so far:

A beautiful woman, a grandmother, mother, sister and friend

You mean so much to us all
there are so many grand memories
none will ever be considered small

You are the world to us
please don't ever forget
for we will surely remember that you are a plus
so please don’t fret

Tis this day
we join hand in hand and heart to heart
and realize that you are here to stay
that we will never part

You've covered the ground
being such a beautiful woman, a grandmother, mother, sister and friend
for that you are renowned
you've been there for us till the end
with a love that's so profound
please don't worry for our hearts will sometime mend

You're in our hearts, our minds & soul
you'll be with us always and forever
even if it means leaving us with a heart and a hole
remember for we will never sever

Soar high with your angel wings
enjoy being happy, healthy and whole
for it is that that death brings
and not life that it stole

You will be with us always and forever
for it is that we can embrace
as far as forgetting that, it will happen never

If anyone has any better words, or rhymes, or thinks it looks better switched around or changed in one way or another please by all means share with me please.

I need this done by about 4:30 today.




Does anyone know of a program that I can get a nice background picture to post this poem on to print it out on, like flowers, etc... Like stationary?

[lv4dogs]

Ok I think I've finished it. I solved my problem of the background not printing by taking a trip to the dollar store & getting some nice paper with some soothing designs on it.

A beautiful woman, a grandmother, mother, sister and friend

You mean so much to us all
there are so many grand memories
none will ever be considered small

You are the world to us
please don't ever forget
for we will surely remember that you are a plus
so please don’t you fret

Tis this day
we join hand in hand and heart to heart
and realize that you are here to stay
that we will never part

You've covered the ground
being such a beautiful woman, a grandmother, mother, sister and friend
for that you are renowned
you've been there for us till the end
with a love that's so profound
please don't worry for our hearts will sometime mend

You're in our hearts, our minds & soul
you'll be with us always and forever
even if it means leaving us with a heart and a hole
remember for we will never sever

Soar high with your angel wings
enjoy being happy, healthy and whole
for it is that that death brings
and not life that it stole

You will be with us always and forever
for it is that we can embrace
as far as forgetting that, it will happen never

by: Sue M.
(please do not copy without permission)

[Daisy and Delilah]

It's beautiful Sue. {{{HUGS}}}

[Dorothy39]

Your poem is beautiful, and, it provided me with an inner strength that needed a nudge today.

{{{HUGS}}} to You, You have my Sincere Condolences!!!!!!

[akaspaddero]

Beautiful. I am sorry for your loss.
We lost my Mother a year ago last month...Your poem touched my heart and put into words what I could not. Thank you for being the my angel today