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It's okay, could be better written.
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Thankfully, the next day was Saturday. I came downstairs at about nine, to find my dad had bought doughnuts. He had always had doughnuts Saturday mornings, since I was a kid. They looked so delicious. I went over and looked at the doughnuts. We had cinnamon rolls, jelly-filled... I stuck my finger in the frosting of the cinnamon roll. I tasted the sweetness of it. My stomach went crazy, I hadn't eaten in a few days. I closed the box. I wasn't supposed to eat.
I went into the bathroom to weigh myself. Ninety-four pounds. I looked in the mirror. I looked so fat. I decided to take a walk to burn some calories. I wanted to walk past Jeremy's house anyway. We needed to talk.
I put on some sweatpants and a t-shirt. I tied a sweatshirt around my waist and put on my tennis shoes. I began walking. I noticed how beautfil the leaves on the trees were. They were just beginning to change colors and some showed a peek of orangeness at the tips. I was about 3 blocks to Jeremy's house. I started a small jog until I got there. Jeremy was sitting on the porch with his head in his hands. He looked sad again.
"Hi Jeremy." I said, waving. He looked up and came over to me.
"You look so pale, Kersey. Do you feel okay?" he asked me. I was feeling dizzy, but I was sick of him talking about me not eating.
"I'm... I'm fine." I said, stopping to take a breath. I put my hand on my forehead and closed my eyes. I opened my eyes again, and Jeremy had a hand on me to steady me.
"Maybe you should sit, take a rest." Jeremy said, pointing me to the curb. I looked at him and things started going black. I saw him one last time before I fell and he looked terrified.
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I woke up three days later, they told me. Luckily for me, my organs were still working, unlike Olivia's.
When I woke up that third day, I looked around. My dad was in the chair on the right side of my bed, and my mom had just entered the room with some lunch. She saw that I was awake and almost dropped the food.
"She's awake! She's awake!" she cried to my dad. I couldn't move. I had tubes in my nose, one down my throat, and some tubes attached to my arms. I made a tiny noise, to try and tell her I hurt. My mom called the doctors in and told them I was awake.
My stomach longed for food. I had tears in the corners of my eyes. The tears were from pain, but most of all, just the all around joy of seeing my parents as happy as they were. They had never been happy for me, or so I thought. I closed my eyes again and waited until the doctor came.
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He finally got there and asked me how I was. I closed my eyes again, hoping he would get the idea. I felt so much pain, weakness, and sadness at the same time. I wanted Jeremy.
The doctor told my mom he would take the tubes out in a few days if my body was doing well enough and I agreed to eat. I would do anything right now if the pain would go away. Eventually I started feeling better, because they were pumping food into me. I was gaining strength day by day and a few days later, I was sitting up in bed.
They had taken the tube out of my mouth so I could talk. I asked my mom if Jeremy had called or anything. Just as I had asked, the nurse knocked on the door. She came in and was holding three dozen roses.
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I gasped and put my hand over my mouth. The nurse set them down on the table next to me. I looked at the card. Written inside, Jeremy had neatly written:
To my best friend.
Kersey, I love you and miss you. I will come visit soon, I just don't want to see you sick. I was too scared to even ride in the ambulence with you. You really scared me there, girl. I'll be by later. Stay safe.
Jeremy
He came over later that day, and I shooed my parents out for a while, telling them to go live for a while, have dinner or something. Jeremy came by about 20 minutes later. He walked in, and when he saw I didn't have any tubes hooked up to me, he breathed a loud sigh of relief. I was overjoyed to see him. He came over and hugged me, very carefully. He acted like I was a tiny kitten, not to be handled too much.
"How's it going? You look pretty good since I saw you last time," he said laughing. "But still as pretty as you ever were." he said, with a kind, gentle, smile.
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"How's it going? You look pretty good since I saw you last time," he said laughing. "But still as pretty as you ever were." he said, with a kind, gentle, smile.
I smiled back.
"I had tubes galore, it was really scary when I woke up." I said. "They are sending me back to the freak house." I said, looking down at my scars, now clearly visable now that I had my hospital gown on. Jeremy didn't know about the cuts.
"Kersey?!? What did you do to yourself!?!" he cried, jumping up and carefully examining my arms.
I just shrugged. "Nobody cared. It was like they kept me company." I said, looking away. I knew he was disappointed.
"I cannot believe you! Why didn't you walk to me?? I'm always here for you Kersey!! Always!" he cried, pacing the room. "I don't want you to go to the rehibilitation center! That is the worst thing for you, Kersey." he said.
"It's to late, Jeremy. They are taking me anyway. I have no choice in this. If I had my choice I would be dead by now.'' I said.
"Do not say that again, Kersey. You should be thankful you are still alive!" he said hugging me again. "I care Kersey, I really really do. I want you to know that. We have never been closer than like whenwe were kids. Can't we be close again?" he pleaded.
I looked at his baby blue eyes and I made him a promise.
"It won't happen again, Jeremy. For you, I won't do it again." I said, smiling. He hugged me once more and kissed my forehead.
"We're close, Jeremy. We always have been. Even though I wasn't ''there'' half the time, we were still close." I said. We sat and talked for another hour or so, then he went home. I had to sleep, they were making me eat on my own tomorrow. I had to make Jeremy happy.
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The next day started really early. I woke up at around six, I swear to God my whole body was messed up. I have never woken so early in my life. Maybe it was just being in a hospital.
The doctor came in with a tray of food. On it he had a bagel, orange juice, toast and some eggs. He wanted me to try and drink most of my juice or most of the toast. He left me alone for a while and I looked at the food. I couldn’t. I looked at the food and all I could see was the fat that dwelled inside of it. But I had promise Jeremy I would try. I took a bite of the toast, because it looked least fatty. It was good, I hadn’t tasted food in so long. I took a sip of the juice and decided I was done for the day. I pushed the table away from my bed and wished Jeremy was here.
As if he heard my thoughts, he was at the hospital about an hour later.
“How’s it going? I see you nibbled some toast.” He said, in a half laugh, half smile kind of voice.
“I tried.” I said. I wasn’t at all upset with myself, it was probably the most food I had eaten in weeks.
“How long until they let you leave?” he asked me.
“I get to leave in a day or two, if I’m up and moving around. I’m mobile.” I said, laughing.
“That’s great to hear. Do they allow visitors at the rehabilitation center?” he asked. “I was planning on visiting like everyday, you know.” He said. He smiled at me.
“I don’t even know how long I will be there.” I said, doubtfully. I would most likely be there until I decided to eat right again, which could be a long time. It was a hard road ahead of me. I didn’t know if I could do it.
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“I won’t be able to do it, Jeremy, I know I won’t.”
“Yes you can, Kersey. If you keep telling yourself you can’t, you won’t.” he said, putting his hand on mine. “I have faith in you, kid.” He said to me.
I got up and sat at the couch by the window. I wanted to go outside so bad. My favorite season was fall, and it was disappearing before my eyes.
“Let’s go outside, Jeremy. Please?” I begged him. As long as I had someone with me, I would be fine.
“I don’t think you should, Kersey. We might get in trouble.” He said, finally coming to sit by me.
“I’m in for a risk. I’ve been locked up for almost two weeks. I need to get out.” I said. I went and I pulled the wheelchair out of the closet.
“At least take me in the wheelchair, please?” I asked again, putting on the puppy dog face. I sat in the wheelchair, ready to go.
“They will think I’m stealing you!” he said laughing. I knew he wanted to make me happy so he decided we would go outside. He grabbed three of my blankets and covered me up in them.
“If you’re going to make me take you outside, I’ve got to make sure you’re warm.” He said, laughing.
He pushed me slowly to the elevator, making sure we weren’t seen. We snuck inside, only to be joined by my nurse on the second floor.
“And where do you think you’re going?’’ she asked me sternly.
“Outside. Just for a while.” I said, ignoring anything she said to me after that.
We got outside and there was a slight October chill in the air. It made me so happy to be outside. I wrapped up in my blankets and looked at all the trees, my favorite part.
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Wow, so far so good. Very well written. It's like they say, "I just couldn't put the book down." Can't wait to read more, so please keep it coming. The suspense is killing me here.
R.I.P. my Precious Katie, Katie Pretty Lady.
Oct. 1991 - Oct. 9, 2005
R.I.P. my Beloved Wild Hair Wee Willy Winky
April 8, 2005 - June 19, 2009
R.I.P. my best friend Buddy.
Sept. 1993 - Feb. 04, 2010
R.I.P. my handsome Mooky.
July 24, 2002 - April 1, 2010
It was so special to me, it was like a romantic first date; him and I sitting outside the hospital watching the leaves turn. I loved every moment.
When we went back inside, I was exhausted. We had laughed and talked for what seemed like forever, and I was really tired. I decided to take a nap.
“I’ll be back later, kiddo.” He said quietly, after I had gotten back in bed. He brushed the hair out of my eyes and kissed my forehead. “Eat if you get the chance.” He then said to me, smiling. He winked at me and left. I finally drifted off and awoke a few hours later to the doctor coming in.
“She can leave tomorrow, if she’s feeling up to it. She needs to attend the rehabilitation center for a few weeks to get back on track. Sound alright?” he asked my parents.
“I guess. I really wish all of this never would have happened.” My mom said, frowning. She was disappointed in me. Little did she know, that same disappointment is probably what made me do this.
I left the next day. They allowed me a day to grab my things from home and pack my clothes. I called Jeremy before I left.
“Hey. I’m leaving soon, just thought I would call and let you know.” I said, wishing he could come stay with me.
“Well, I will come over later then, hopefully they will let me.” He said. He was so funny, so anxious to be with me every second of the day.
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