Um, I've actually read more of the story now, I like your writing, I like the storyline - for the most part..No offence, but some of it doesn't make a lot of sense..like the anorexia part..You make it seem like tons of people die from it..when they don't. It's rare, thankfully, that people die. Unless the girls parents were totally uninvolved and uncaring they would notice before she was at the point she was going to die. They could come close, need hospitalization for weeks to months, but is unlikely they die...