Critique my drawing...

[Karen]

It is a little hard to tell from the angle of the picture, but it looks like the left horse's right eye is either too high, or the left too low. A little more definition/shading under the right eye of the lighter-colored horse would help, that area kind of looks blank, but horsies have some shadows and definition of the eye socket and the veins and muscles below the eye - kinda his "cheekbones" if he were a person!

[JuniorxMyxLove]

It is a little hard to tell from the angle of the picture, but it looks like the left horse's right eye is either too high, or the left too low. A little more definition/shading under the right eye of the lighter-colored horse would help, that area kind of looks blank, but horsies have some shadows and definition of the eye socket and the veins and muscles below the eye - kinda his "cheekbones" if he were a person!

lol i think the left is too low, I just kind of scribbled it in so there would be somethingt there.

There actually is a little shading there (it got washed out in the pic) but I agree that I need to do more there. *sigh* detail is my enemy. ahha I get annoyed and bored trying to add little details.

[Karen]

Ah, but detail is what makes the image better! I more tend to get so involved in the little details I miss the big picture - kinda the opposite!

[JuniorxMyxLove]

Ah, but detail is what makes the image better! I more tend to get so involved in the little details I miss the big picture - kinda the opposite!

lol, i know. I just get so BORED! XD

I 'spose one of these days I'll get around to adding detail to it...grumblegrumble.

[lvpets2002]

Well I think the Drawing looks Great.. Yes I am sure some detailing could be done.. But you need to see this in which will make you a better artist.. You have done a heck of a better job than I could do..