So...someone on another forum asked me to draw their grandmother's horse as a birthday present. Yay, right?

Eh, not so much. I don't really like the drawing, and STUPID Felix got into my pencils and scattered them around the house so I had to do the whole thing with a 2B and a 5H pencil (waaah, I want my 6B back!) I got as much darkness as I could with the 3B that I found this morning (I didn't want to press harder so I just kept making more and more and more layers lol) It's like...typical! The first time anyone ever asks me to draw them something, it looks like poop.



-_-

Sorry the picture is a little dark...stupid lights in this room aren't working right now so I can't get very good lighting in here.

Buut.....I need it to come out somewhat good. Which is where you guys come in Please critique?! The only things I will say are that I STINK at hair (hence the mane) and that I guess on a few parts (some of the chest, the ears, and the bottom half of the nostrils) because they were either cut off, covered by a logo, or...not there in the original pic 0.0 [I messed up a little on the neck to had to improvise on the chest area to compensate]

Be mean, be harsh, be whatever.

I know it's kinda hard to really critique without the original photo, so if you want to see the reference picture, PM me [I don't want to put it on here without the owner's permission]