Your opinion please

**Catty1** · 11-08-2007, 09:17 PM

Well, da bozz was pretty impressed with the feedback - so here is a revised banner for the Pets and Apartments Ezine!

Comments again, please. If you want to just add an ETA to your original post re banner #2, that is totally cool!

Thanks!

C

**Karen** · 11-08-2007, 11:09 PM

No collars on the pups? Not good for a city pet! Um, other than that, I'd say either darken in the city a bit or add more animals! Guinea pig? Gerbil?

**Fuzzybuns** · 11-09-2007, 02:12 AM

The flying goldfish looks a bit out of place.

Honestly, I think it looks too choppy or spaced out, it needs to be brought together more.

If it were me, I'd make it a 500x250 just to tighten it up a bit. Another way might be to add a building or two on the outer edges, with the text stacked and in the middle, maybe in a bold font. That would give you plenty of spots to place animals.

**Laura's Babies** · 11-09-2007, 07:17 AM

I think it is nice, not to busy or cluttered.

**moosmom** · 11-09-2007, 09:52 AM

Candace,

It looks a little washed out in the background. I'd definitely give the city a little more color, with possibly sky and clouds? Fuzzybuns is right, it looks like the fish is kind of hanging in mid-air. Anyway of getting him into a bowl? Nice banner!!

**jennielynn1970** · 11-09-2007, 02:50 PM

I think it's cute, but I didn't realize there was a "city" in the background until it was pointed out on a response, lol. Not paying attention closely enough, I guess!

I agree with the flying fish... you could take him out since there is a fishbowl at the bottom.

Whatever you decide, I'm sure it will be nice!

**catmandu** · 11-09-2007, 05:19 PM

I Personally Would Add A Few More Pets To Fill In The Ledge Like A Hamster Or Gerbil And Accentuate The City!
Otherwise It Looks Wonderful And We Would Love To See The First Copy!

**momcat** · 11-09-2007, 07:45 PM

I love it!!!!! Especially the little kitty playing on the rope

**Catty1** · 11-09-2007, 08:06 PM

Thanks, everyone! I sent all the responses to Marrett this morning, and he emailed back: "Wow tough crowd! Thanks Candace.

Brb
Marrett"

LOL

He is a nicest fellow - and truly appreciates feedback intended to make something better!

Will keep you posted on the next ezine...will try and attach it here somewhere!

hugs!

c

**sandragonfly** · 11-11-2007, 09:17 AM

oh no city's gone.

it matched "urban" REALLY well. without that background, it sort of looks like too busy now, too contrast-ed. and a bit confusing.

everything's not so centered - great composition so every animal can be looked at. puppies without collars doesn't bother me, you can't see the collar on the kitty anyway. and it looks more natural without it also.

location of fish in second banner is better, but I would remove the second bowl - maybe have it fly out straight so it can fall back in, not fly to die?