Art trade: vixzy

[slleipnir]

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I'm finished I guess


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I can't get this pose to look right, especially the hind end.

Could someone redline over top of this as to what I should fix???

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Look any better? I'm not going to change it now. Thanks for all the help I'm not done yet...not sure what to do with the butterfly/background...I want the butterfly to look sorta magical or somehting?

[Giselle]

Don't know if this will help, but maybe if you Googled a couple images to get some references? I'm guessing you just free-handed this completely off the top of your head, so maybe a few photos might help..




I just Googled "Border collie frisbee"

I think it looks terrific, although you might want to make the shoulder come out more?

[slleipnir]

Thanks! I did try looking for refs, but I couldn't find any that fit the position of the back legs....I'll try fixing the shoulders, thanks

I updated the picture too

[Argranade]

Yep those back legs would look alot better with some movement like jumping.... maybe one leg up one leg down. Also a tounge hanging out would be like that dog was chasing that butterfly.

Nice pic tho.

[slleipnir]

I don't really want her to be jumping though

[Giselle]

Ohh, I think I see what you mean. I think it's standing too "human"... Perhaps if you bring the front end back a little?