Thanks! I disagree with the way I wrote it, like how eight and great were separated by one sentence, but we had to follow a few guidelines(how many syllables in a sentence, where to put the rhymes, etc..) I wish I could do it my own way, I would have made so many great changes.
All in all, I did try my best, and I guess what really matters is that the theme is well put and easy to understand.
~My theme was loving and sharing memories with a pet, or something like that.