Some of the info seemed like the regurgitated info that is on every single raw page out there, but it is such vital info. On the plus side you also put a fresh spin on the paper.
One thing that stuck out in my mind though is that no one ever mentions fur in these reports. If you can get a fresh kill (such as a rabbit) that it the best for cleaning the teeth (physically.) pH is the major cleaner for mouth health, not the bones (very misleading info/myth that is out there online. The bones do play a minor roll in cleaning the teeth, but the internal pH is the thing the majority of the credit should be going to.) (Then again... this is another thing that is debated amongst the raw community. ...I'm sticking with the P.H.D. in nutrition on this one.*)
Other than that I thought it was a nice essay as a school project.
Oh, maybe it wasn't listed since i didn't pull up the file (I just did preview) but when writing a paper one should ALWAYS have another page listing the sources. (I forget the name for the credits.)
*wish i had a source to give you on that tid bit.
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Sent! I'm glad so many people are interested
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