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    Critique my drawing...

    I finished my first drawing in MONTHS. It's still got issues, but...well....



    Critique?

    (be harsh, just remember i'm a self-taught 15 yr old, kay?)
    in on the joke and i cant stop laughing

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    well if it's supposed to look like 2 horses, ya did good. If it's supposed to be your grandparents walking on the beach holding hands I think it needs some work, LOL

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    WOW!!!


    It's fantastic!!
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    It's awesome!!
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    That's nice--wish I could draw like that
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    It is a little hard to tell from the angle of the picture, but it looks like the left horse's right eye is either too high, or the left too low. A little more definition/shading under the right eye of the lighter-colored horse would help, that area kind of looks blank, but horsies have some shadows and definition of the eye socket and the veins and muscles below the eye - kinda his "cheekbones" if he were a person!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Karen View Post
    It is a little hard to tell from the angle of the picture, but it looks like the left horse's right eye is either too high, or the left too low. A little more definition/shading under the right eye of the lighter-colored horse would help, that area kind of looks blank, but horsies have some shadows and definition of the eye socket and the veins and muscles below the eye - kinda his "cheekbones" if he were a person!
    lol i think the left is too low, I just kind of scribbled it in so there would be somethingt there.

    There actually is a little shading there (it got washed out in the pic) but I agree that I need to do more there. *sigh* detail is my enemy. ahha I get annoyed and bored trying to add little details.
    in on the joke and i cant stop laughing

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    Ah, but detail is what makes the image better! I more tend to get so involved in the little details I miss the big picture - kinda the opposite!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Karen View Post
    Ah, but detail is what makes the image better! I more tend to get so involved in the little details I miss the big picture - kinda the opposite!
    lol, i know. I just get so BORED! XD

    I 'spose one of these days I'll get around to adding detail to it...grumblegrumble.
    in on the joke and i cant stop laughing

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    Well I think the Drawing looks Great.. Yes I am sure some detailing could be done.. But you need to see this in which will make you a better artist.. You have done a heck of a better job than I could do..

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    Pfft! I think it looks amazing! I am not an artist so I don't know a thing about the details. As you said, you are a 15 year old. Just keep practicing and you will improve. I am "several" years older than you and could NEVER draw something this good.
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    lol thanks guys (:
    in on the joke and i cant stop laughing

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    Horses are notoriously hard to draw. I think it's great!

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