Poem

[sumbirdy]

I wrote this poem for all the dogs in puppy mills but i need a little help finishing it...

if i was somebody else's dog
i wouldn't be in this place
if i was somebody else's dog
there wouldn't be so much pain to face
if i was somebody else's dog
i wouldn't be so alone
if i was somebody else's dog
i would have a home
if i was somebody else's dog
i wouldn't be locked in this cage
if i was somebody else's dog
i wouldn't have to deal with the rage
if i was somebody else's dog...


any suggestions anyone?

[cyber-sibes]

If I were somebody else's dog,
I'd be a good dog, too.
If I were somebody else's dog...
somebody else, like you.

[sumbirdy]

If I were somebody else's dog,
I'd be a good dog, too.
If I were somebody else's dog...
somebody else, like you.

i really like that ...its good! thanks