Art trade: vixzy

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I'm finished I guess :)
http://tainted-sky.net/draw/vixzy.jpg
:)
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http://www.tainted-sky.net/sketch/redlineplz2.jpg
I can't get this pose to look right, especially the hind end.

Could someone redline over top of this as to what I should fix???

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http://www.tainted-sky.net/draw/vixzy2.jpg

Look any better? I'm not going to change it now. Thanks for all the help :D I'm not done yet...not sure what to do with the butterfly/background...I want the butterfly to look sorta magical or somehting?

Don't know if this will help, but maybe if you Googled a couple images to get some references? I'm guessing you just free-handed this completely off the top of your head, so maybe a few photos might help..
http://www.grc.nasa.gov/WWW/Purchase...og_frisbee.gif

http://www.kateconnick.com/postcards/frisbeebcs.jpg

I just Googled "Border collie frisbee" :p

I think it looks terrific, although you might want to make the shoulder come out more?

Thanks! I did try looking for refs, but I couldn't find any that fit the position of the back legs....I'll try fixing the shoulders, thanks :D

I updated the picture too

Yep those back legs would look alot better with some movement like jumping.... maybe one leg up one leg down. Also a tounge hanging out would be like that dog was chasing that butterfly.

Nice pic tho. :)

I don't really want her to be jumping though

Ohh, I think I see what you mean. I think it's standing too "human"... Perhaps if you bring the front end back a little?
http://photos.signonsandiego.com/gal...w/res46098.jpg

its just a suggestion........

make the hocck slighty more defined? What breed is s/he?

Thanks for the redlines :) I had the legs like that at first but wasn't sure I did it right...:D

She is a fox mix appearintly

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I love it. It's beautiful *g* hehe. I love the little wings.. and everything. The anatomy looks fine to me too.. (:

uh nice.............very nice.................maybe some sparkles?? or some fairy like colors??

very nice I really LOVE IT!!!

Done...

Wow, what a gorgeous drawing!! Great job! :D

I love the last one! It would look great with a purple background as well. I love the first one also! Great job!!