Originally posted by wolf_Q

Ok I'll try to help if I can!!
All your ideas were wonderful! I know I'm still working on the intro. I know it stinks. You had some great ideas on how to better my speech thingy

Your idea of making an outline was wonderful. Also useing the example of Teddy for why you should spay and nuter was great. I am done with the second part. But like to keep it to myself for a few days and go back everyday and change what i think doesn't sound right or is just stupid or if I feel I need to add on then I can. So I will have to posted in a few days.

Ash