Draft of new logo etc...feedback please FINAL DRAFT? #17

[phesina]

That's really nice, Candace. I thought the first one was good, but I can see how much better it is now.

[catnapper]

I liked the simplicity of the first one best. The final draft is more evident that its a computer but I think the mouse seems out of place -- the line weight is much finer than that of the heart and computer.

[catnapper]

Okie dokie, I only have paint on this computer, but how about these ideas? They are dorky to the max right now, but I hope you see the concept I was thinking of. I was trying ot just darken the mouse's line thickness and couldn't do it with paint so I played with different ideas.

By the way, I do think its a great logo!

[Catty1]

Kim, I agree about the mouse and cord...as the artist said, this is a draft and has yet to be "drawn". Hey, your sketches are fine...my first one looked more like Spongebob with a heart! LOL

However I will keep the cord where it is, although I do like your heart shape you did with it - the way it is done now, it creates a shape going into the heart curve, and I know the artist looks for a 'shape' in the whole thing - hence the staggering of the text on the RHS to mold it a bit as well.

Thanks again, everyone - this is a first and kind of scary for me. Your support is SO appreciated, you just don't know.

[pomtzu]

This is just my opinion, but I don't think the heart really fits in. Makes it too "girlie" looking - needs to look more business-like - altho catnapper's idea of making a heart from the mouse cord is good. (the image on the right)

[Catty1]

Girlie is good, JMO - my demographic is mainly residential. The heart emphasizes the "care", as well as that word meaning repair/maintenance/service.

It's different in that it is girly - any way to stand out in the marketplace works!

I do understand your POV, but am going with the girly for a reason.

Thanks!

[pomtzu]

Girlie is good, JMO - my demographic is mainly residential. The heart emphasizes the "care", as well as that word meaning repair/maintenance/service.

It's different in that it is girly - any way to stand out in the marketplace works!

I do understand your POV, but am going with the girly for a reason.

Thanks!

I understand. It's just that a lot of folks have the attitude that women don't know a whole heck of a lot - especially on tech issues - and might be steered away because of their perception of the heart (girlie, fluff, and whatever other stereotypes that they care to apply!)