Richard you're great. I like especially the last one. I will try some this weekend. I feel I just cannot do it in between... (especially not in a foreign language)
Richard you're great. I like especially the last one. I will try some this weekend. I feel I just cannot do it in between... (especially not in a foreign language)
That wasps taunts me as
It climbs the morning window
Pounce! Missed again, drat!
In honor of #NationalHaikuDay
I've Been Frosted
Edwina is just enjoying the weekend comics. She could not possibly be disturbing your reading . She knows the best part of the newspaper.She has that "why are you disturbing my reading" look on her face.
OMG! These were great and so true!!Originally posted by RICHARD
my cat is my friend
until he decides to knock
stuff off of the shelf
cold morning warm cat
sleeping on top of my feet
can life be better?
i would rather clean
10 litterboxes than to
deal with mean people
my cat is pure white
which makes it easy to tell
when he gets dirtyI especially liked the 2nd one.
Hmmm...I'll have to see if I can come up with some haikus to add to this thread, but I'm better at the limericks...LOL
Last edited by wolflady; 11-21-2002 at 03:11 PM.
I must echo Wolflady, those are fantastic, Richard!!!
you all can do it!
just remember 5-7-5 (syllables per line), be abstract and
have fun...
my scientist cat
knows that a falling object
gets me out of bed
hey, that looks real good
my wet nose goes in your plate
ugh, you eat that stuff?
oh my, cat haiku!
you are far more talented
fixing me dinner
Last edited by RICHARD; 11-21-2002 at 07:10 PM.
Great poetry Richard. Keep it coming. I'd love to see more pictures tnat go with them too.
black jacket, white cat
fifteen minutes to pluck hair
off my work clothes
looks like you're asleep
i know you are not asleep
POUNCE! see i told you..
quick! call the circus
watch me walk along the shelf.....
.....was that real crystal?
you cannot stay mad
because i did that today
cur-i-os-i-ty....![]()
Last edited by RICHARD; 11-22-2002 at 03:35 PM.
You go Richard!These are great! I bet we could take all the heartwarming stories and all of the poetry and make a Best of Pet Talk stories and poems book. I think it would be a good seller for all those pet-loving people out there!
Have you ever submitted anything to Pet Warmers Richard?
For Gabe, in the thread about his first Vermont snow:
What is that cold stuff?
Yes, I've luxurious fur
But I'm not stupid!
What evil lurks there?
Frozen, white, wet on my paws ...
Quick! Shut the porch door!
Oh you nasty folk
Laughing at feline distress ...
I shed on you all.
six thirty p.m.
time for me to wake up and
wait for you at door
----
now that you are home
i need to be loved, scratched, fed
your needs come later
----
today i slept ate
slept ate pooped slept ate somemore
what a day i had
----
sprawled on the cold floor
dozing in the warm sunshine,
wake me for dinner?
----
some strange feline broke
into the house while i slept
and messed up the rugs
----
saturday morning
rise and shine dad it's almost
four thirty a.m.!
Richard- those are sooooo darn funny! You really have a nack for cat haikus.
Filou this morning.Originally posted by RICHARD
saturday morning
rise and shine dad it's almost
four thirty a.m.!
After all he is sure that it's
Dad who will get up.
I can not help it.
These things just fall out of me.
Please just clean the box.
A kitty is so "new".
I have been around for years.
You WILL love me more.
Yes, I saw it there.
Yes, I see it on the floor.
How? I just don't know.
Why do you sleep while
I’m purring gently in your
Ear: I need some food.
White powder looks soft.
Will my paws walk in velvet?
Oh it’s cold and wet!
She sharpens the big knife.
They’ll have raw meat for dinner
Run to the kitchen!
Do not get up now.
Look I am just pushing my
head in your armpits.
Last edited by Barbara; 11-24-2002 at 09:12 AM.
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