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    ps i don't have schoolie either

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    Very cool story! I'm curious to know what happens next, write more!
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    "Why are you here?" I asked.. "Im your father, you dont want to see me?" "Not..." He came over and grabbed my mouth.. "I am your father, you are to respect me, and do as i say.. Do you understand me?" I blinked a few times, i could smell beer in his breath, vodika maybe.. "Ok" I sobbed, i tried not to, but it's too hard to hold it in.. He let go, and went back over to the fridge looking for anything he could mix together with his dumb vodika bottle.. "You aren't supposed to be here.." i said, I backed up thinking he might come grab me again, but he just looked me in the eye and said "I miss your mother" As casual as can be i replied "She doesnt miss you, and neither do i, so get away from us, so we can actually be happy!" I ran into my room as fast as i could, hearing him trail not too far behind me.. I slammed my door and collapsed on my bed sobbing.. Dad hasn't been sober at all today, probably not even at all this week.. That's why mom and dad got divorced, he was so controlling when he drank.. I heard him pounding on the door, even when he would stop, i would still hear pouning in my ears...

    Ahhh, Boring?

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    nope, not boring....more please

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    Originally posted by green_chameleon_girl
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    Sincerely:

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    LOL! You Crack me up, but ill write some tommorow, too sleepy

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    Ok fine I can sleep outside your house with some signs and a sleeping back ill be first inline LOL!!
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    lmao, you can have signs that say "We are still waiting for an update, still.." lmao

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    hahah or I want More Im impatient LOOL!
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    Originally posted by CamCamPup33
    lmao, you can have signs that say "We are still waiting for an update, still.." lmao
    Yes, we're waiting impatiently!!!
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    Alright, alright i will update now! lol

    He stopped, i heard a door open and close, i got up and peeked my head out of the door, there was mom, but dad wasn't anywhere in sight.. I came out of my room and into the kitchen i went.. "Mom.." I sobbed, and continued, "..Dad was here.." She looked at me, when she looks at me sometimes i feel like she is staring straight through me.. "I know.." She trailed off and unloaded grocerys from Publix.. Mom inturrupted the scilence "Come with me.." She threw the bags into the trash can and headed out for the door.. "Where are we going.." "Go up to your room, pack things.. Things you will need, and call down when your ready.." she said.. "But, mom, where are we going?" "Hun, it's where are you going not we.." I sighed and went upstairs to pack.. I brought clothes, books, shoes, and just about everything that would fit in the suit case.. Where could i be going?

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    where is she goign????

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    MORE MORE MORE MORE
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    Should i update?
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    Nahhhh! Maybe later!

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