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    lol. i love hearing you beg for more story hehe
    ok hers more:

    Suddenly girls started pouring out in to the halls running downstairs. I was swept down with them. I’d lost track of the girls I knew by the time I got to the top of the stairs. I follwed the stream of running people i could only hope they were going to the dining room. Eventually we got there, I just stood in the door unsure where to go now, I couldn’t see any of the girls I knew. Then I noticed that people started shoving me from behind to get in: I was blocking the door. Someone waving and shouting my name caught my attention, it was Kata. I hurried over to them and sat down.
    “What’s for dinner?”I asked.

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    MORE!!!

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    We need to hear more. I love it!

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    Thats what I want to know. Whats for dinner. Keep writing!
    You know I am in the process of reading about four different stories, and I need closure on some of these stories. Know what I mean girls????

    WE NEED MORE!!!

    Thank You, kittycats_delight for my new siggy!!!

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    LOL this is kinda long so this is all you get for awhile. (well about a day anyways )


    “What’s for dinner?” I asked.
    “ Meat Loaf surprise tonight,” said Zsofi “ It’s not really a surprise anymore though.” The other girls laughed along with her. I didn’t.
    “Well what vegetarian food do they have? There was no way I could eat meat. Especially meat loaf. “ haha! Vegetarian? Yeah right! You eat what you get here. If you have a problem you might want to talk to Mrs. Calloor or Ms. Frodge, the head mistress.” Sabira was kinda of making fun of me but I didn’t care.
    “Where can I find them?” I demanded
    “Whoa Sparky! Chill you can’t just go storming in there and start whining about the food to them!” CJ snickered when she said that.
    “Well I can and I will! Now tell me where I can find her or I’ll just have to go looking for my myself.”
    Kata sighed. “ok-ok. No need to blow a gasket now.just take a deep breath and you’ll calm down…”
    I was getting red in the face from anger. Kata must have noticed because she got a strange glint in her eye and proceeded to tell me how to get to the office.
    ” You go out of the dining hall, turn left and go down the hall till you see a big, dark wooden door on your right. Then you go in there and down the first stairs you see go all the way down then turn left again and it’s the third door on your left. Are you happy now? Sheesh!”
    The other girls were staring at Kata as if unsure what to do, but I was in too much of a huryy to really notice like I should have. I hadn’t eaten in all day, I set out to find the office chanting the directions in my head as I went, I turned left in to the hall and found the big wooden door and went down the stairs that were right in front of the door. I began to wonder if this was the right way…I did just what Kata said right? I kept going anyway. I could smell a mold, like in a basement, and the walls were damp around me. It was getting darker, only a few lights at the beginning of the hallway I passed two doors, but didn’t see a third door, maybe it was all the way at the end. I was getting a little nervous and feeling claustrophobic, like the walls were closing in on me. I could barley see now, and began feeling my way holding on to the dark wet walls. I felt something hard. It was a door. The third door on the left. I knocked then opened the door and peered in when noone answered.
    “AAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!” I screamed and ran out stumbling over my own feet.

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    What is it? I was getting a little scared when you posted the part that said there were only a few lights, and it was gettign darker. I mean I would have got out of there!!



    moremoremoremoremoremore

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    You can't leave us like this! We got to have more! More, Please!

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    eeeeh sorry it took so long i had writers block


    I knocked then opened the door and peered in when noone answered. “AAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!” I screamed and ran out stumbling over my own feet.
    I ran in to something big and solid, it barked scaring me even more until I recognized the voice. It was Jordan! How did he get here? I started running back down the hallway the way I came and finally found the main hall. I stopped a red haired girl I saw walking past and asked for directions to the main office. Once I as on my way I could feel myself start to get mad. “How DARE she play such a stupid trick on me?!” I thought, “Why was I stupid enough to fall for it?”

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    I love this!

    More please!

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