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    Update---
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    "Ready to come home, girl?" she asked me. I thumped my tail even more and she smiled at me. She picked me up and layed me on the seat in the back of their car. I attempted to stand, or at least sit, to see what was going on. I was unsuccessful, and collapsed back on my side.
    We pulled into her driveway and she lead me inside.
    "Carson, this is... Wait, what is your name?" She asked me. I looked at her and turned my head. She laughed.
    "Well, this is Carson. Be very gentle, Carson. She's got an owie." She pointed to my hot pink cast. I licked her face and followed her into her bedroom. She had started making some pictures on a piece of paper.
    "Hey girl, can I take your picture for these posters?" She asked me. I guess I had no choice. She grabbed her camera and snapped a few random shots, and then printed them out. She one by one taped them onto the posters.
    "How do they look?" She asked me and Carson, who had just entered the room. I barked to show her my approval. She smiled at me and patted me and Carson on the head as she walked out of the room. We both followed.
    "So, what happened to you?" Carson asked me.
    I stopped and looked at him. "You really want to know?" I asked.
    "Why not?" he asked.
    "They took me away from my parents and I got bit by an older dog. He broke my leg I guess." I said. "Things can't get much worse, but they do. I have to stay outside all the time back at my place." I said.
    Carson didn't say anything back, so we kept walking. We walked over to his basket of toys.
    "Here, you can have this for your house." He said, putting a brand-new stuffie on the floor in front of me. I smelled it and attacked it.
    "Thanks Carson." I said wagging my tail.
    Carson and I had a blast together. Even though I couldn't do much, he accomidated everything for me. We play tug-o-war a few times, and we played with his stuffies and his rawhides. But little did I know how fast it would end.

    Chapter 3: Back to Jason's
    The phone rang one evening while I was still at Amanda's. I startled me, and I nearly jumped out of my skin.
    "Hello?" Amanda said. "Oh... Okay. You can come get her anytime." She said, hanging up the phone. She came over to me with the saddest look on her face.
    "So you're names Ari, huh?" she said. At the sound of my name I perked my ears and cocked my head. "Jason's gonna come pick you up today." She said with a tear in her eye. My heart sunk. I didn't want to go back. I was having the time of my life with Amanda and Carson. I looked at her with my saddest puppy eyes. She soon was crying, and all I could do was lick her hand. It's okay... I wanted to say. We'll meet again. I promise.
    I licked her face as the tears rolled off, and soon I heard a knock at the door. She quickly wiped away her tears and cleared her throat. I heard Jason's voice.
    "That's my owner, Carson. I gotta go." I said, giving him a quick nip on the nose. "Bye.." I said, grabbing my stuffie and giving him another look, quick.
    Amanda grabbed me once more, and looked me in the eyes. "Be a good girl Ari." she said hugging me and quietly crying into my fur. I whimpered, as it was my only way to show her I would. She handed me over and closed the door. As we left I could hear her sobbing inside. Carson peeked his head out the window and I barked to him so he could hear me. I'll be back, Carson, I told him as we drove away.
    *****

    Edit- forgot to add this... I bawled my eyes out trying to write thissssss!

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    MORE MORE MORE.................HURRY!!!

    (ohhhhh that Jason..... )
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    more more more!!!!!!!!!! lol

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    i think we are the only ones begging for more!! but yes more.. im crying.. ahh wheres cami

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    Nice to know I have an audience! I will update every few paragraphs to satisfy you all till i write more!

    "Ari, you're SO naughty!" Jason yelled at me as soon as we got in the car. I dropped my ears and listened to him yell the whole way home. As usual, when we got home I got tied to the post. He slammed the door when he got inside and I could hear his parents yelling at him. Serves him right. I said. I then realized I had forgotten my stuffie. I barked and barked as loud as I could to get Jason's attention. He came out and grabbed the stuffie out of the car.
    "Will that shut you up?" he said throwing it in the dirt. I ran to grab it, only to find out he had thrown it just out of my reach. I stuck my paws out and reached for it, but it was just to far. Then Jason started laughing at me. I began to whine again, and he laughed harder. I decided to show him my un-tying abilities. I went over to my leash, and bit it until it came loose. I ran and grabbed my toy before he could stop me.

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    aww!! bad idea ari then hes gonna like tie you to another something like a chain!! oh oh im giving you ideas for your story.. PSSTT dont use that its too much to handle!

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    "ARI! NO!" he yelled and grabbed me by the scruff of the neck. I whimpered and dropped my stuffie again. He dragged me over to the post and retied me, tighter this time, and threw the stuffie over to me. I grabbed it and smelled it, because I could still smell Carson.
    I fell asleep that night with the stuffie still in my mouth. I dreamt about Amanda, and Carson, and even Amanda's caring mom. How I wished I could go back...
    I woke up with a start. People were outside, and Jason's dad was mowing the lawn. Jason had Kevin and Tipper over. I held onto my stuffie and watched all the excitement.

    They are getting shorter and shorter lol

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    hmmm i dont like the short ones... bigger ones.. LONGER!!!!!!!!

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    Please MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MMORE MORE MORE MORE ORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!! This is really great!!!!!


    (I really hate you Jason!! )

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    I woke up with a start. People were outside, and Jason's dad was mowing the lawn. Jason had Kevin and Tipper over. I held onto my stuffie and watched all the excitement.
    I longed to go play, and I began tugging on my leash again. It took me longer, but I eventually got loose. I limped over to Jason and Kevin. Jason looked at me and reached to grab me. I slipped away and ran as fast as I could with my 3 working legs. I got to the gate, but ran into Jason's mom, who was carrying the grocceries. I made her rip one of the bags open, because she saw me and I ran into her. I immediately sat down, because I knew I was in for one good punishment. Jason ran over and grabbed me by the scruff of the neck again and brought me over to the post.
    But Jason's mom did not seem to be mad. She calmly picked up the grocceries and took them inside and emerged a few minutes later carrying a huge chain. I put my tail between my legs and waited.



    Putting it on pause... Gotta dry dishes HANG ON!!

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    This is a really good story. Poor Ari, what an ignorant kid Jason is. Can't wait to read more!
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    NOOOOOOO! you shouldnt have used my idea!!! *sniffles* why did they even get the dog?!?!

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    YOU ARE STOPPING TO DRY DISHES......Come on!!!!

    Let them air dry!!! This way there's no streaks!! (hee hee)

    alright.....I guess we'll wait

    (ohh....that Jason....I'd like to tie him up and leave him in the mud!)



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    But Jason's mom did not seem to be mad. She calmly picked up the grocceries and took them inside and emerged a few minutes later carrying a huge chain. I put my tail between my legs and waited. His mom came over with the chain and hooked the chain onto my post. She then took off my leash and tied the chain to my collar.
    "That should hold her." She said, glaring at me. "Dumb dog..."
    I had remember the doctor saying my cast could come off in a week or two, and it had been at least 2 weeks since I had gotten back to Jasons. The cast was incredibly dirty, and it had almost fallen off. I had run out of ways to try and get the chain off. I tugged, I pulled, I bit. Nothing worked. I was doomed.


    Back! *Glad to know someone likes her writing!*

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    ....go on.............
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