You still need to move the periods to the outsides of the parenthesis.
For example... this sentence:
While pregnant eating an unhealthy diet or not consuming proper vitamins essential for the babies growth can cause fetal malnutrition. (Craig, Kermis, Digdon 2002)
Should look like this:
While pregnant, eating an unhealthy diet or not consuming proper vitamins essential for the babies growth can cause fetal malnutrition (Craig, Kermis, Digdon 2002).
(I added a comma after "While pregnant" and a period after the end parenthesis)
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