What I've added:
"...His mother sat on the shiny, white, plastic patio furniture behind him, sipping an ice cold lemonade. As the wind blew again, the sweet aroma of lemonade caught his attention. He looked at his mother with a sullen look on his face."
And...:
"...Jason’s blue eyes dashed from his father to the glistening, blue pool. He took a deep breath, inhaling the sterile, clean smell of the chlorine. He steadied his feet and closed his eyes."
So far?
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