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  1. #91
    Great story, Meg!

    More please... I agree, more than a teaser.

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    A big teaser...

    “If we need to, could you pass as my aunt?” I asked. I was getting anxious and nervous that they would reject me as a guardian. Frieda smiled and nodded.
    “I will do anything so we can keep these kids.” She whispered as she patted my knee. I bit the inside of my cheeks. I was being such a sap, but I couldn’t help it. Frieda was like the mother I always wanted. She loves Spencer more than life itself, as a matter of fact, she loved all of her kids more than life. She raised them perfectly, making them do things on their own, but sheltering them when they needed it most. They weren’t billionaires, but they had the money they needed to get along. I was afraid of what was going to happen when we brought two more kids into the household including the other four.

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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

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    wow you didn't write much while i was gone...*tsk* *tsk* lol, NO MORE TEASERS!!

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    LOL... I wrote a bunch... only posting teasers though!

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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

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    Great Story!!!!!!!! Write more!!!! I need to know what happens! And no more teasers!!!

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    teasers are EVIL!

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    We arrived at the hospital a half an hour later. I got out and my knees felt weak. I felt like slapping myself across the face, telling myself to get with it. I felt pale and Frieda must have seen it too, because she came over and put her arm on my shoulder to steady me.
    “Are you going to be okay?” she asked. We both stopped before the large rotating doors of the Montview hospital.
    “Yeah. I’m okay.” I lied.
    We stepped into the ice-cold lobby of the hospital. I rubbed my hands on my arms as the goose bumps appeared on them.
    “Redding.” I said to the secretary at the desk. She flipped through a small book and pointed to the left.
    “Room 2503.” She said, not even looking at us. I rolled my eyes at her and left the chilling lobby.

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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

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    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

    I just finished reading it all and I want to know what happens!

    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

    lol


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    It was the third room on the right of the hallway. I slowly opened the door of the nursery and looked around. There were about 12 cradles; all but 2 occupied. A man looked up from the glass office behind the nursery and came out to greet us.
    “Miss Redding, I presume?” he shook my hand stiffly.
    “Yes, sir.” I said in a near whisper. I squeezed my eyes shut as he turned around to grab some papers. Mistake, Kyla. You didn’t need to call him sir.
    “Let’s see. Please sign here, and here on the next page. The children have yet to be named, did your mother have any names chosen?” he asked.
    “Well she loved the name Simone for a girl and Joey for the little boy.” My throat tightened just speaking of her. I signed the papers with Frieda’s hand on my shoulder. He scribbled some notes on a piece of paper and the babies’ birth certificates. He turned back around and smiled at me.

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    now she's slowly opening
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    Your such a good writer.

    once again,

    MORE MORE MORE! lol


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    Teaser:

    “Congratulations.” He said, and shook my hand again. A nurse was wheeling the babies out, Simone in pink and Joey in blue. I smiled, seeing the tiny little humans, and knowing they were legally mine. That thought scared me the more I thought about it, though.
    “Thank you, Sir.” I said, and I picked up Simone and place her in the carrier that we had brought in for her. I carefully buckled her in, remembering Kendra and Alexis being this age and how fragile they were. Frieda took Joey and carefully placed him in the matching carrier. We then picked them up off the table and brought them into our lives for the first time.

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    GRRRRR!!!

    THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!

    KEEP WRITTING! How can you do this to us?? ::crys::: what did I ever do to you!! ::crys::


    WONDERFUL job!

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    Originally posted by Aspen and Misty
    GRRRRR!!!

    THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!

    KEEP WRITTING! How can you do this to us?? ::crys::: what did I ever do to you!! ::crys::


    WONDERFUL job!

    Ash
    I COMPLETELY agree!


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    more more more!!!!!

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    keep writing!!!!!

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