Your subject is "handicapped drivers". The first sentence is: "why are they driving in the first place?"
The thesis statement you have decided upon then is: handicapped people should not drive. If that is NOT your thesis statement (why you are writing) then change either the subject or the first sentence. The post as it is is discriminatory. It's insensitive. It's wrong.
I hope you never have to have the blue tags. If you do, I hope you encounter people who are more understanding.
Blue tags have nothing to do with driving abilities.
Ps. If myself and others are "taking" your post in a manner you did not intend, review your post. I'm not normally one who intends to be hurtful in my posts, but yours.... well, I just felt something needed to be said.
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