I don't think Kfamr was being mean. All GOOD writers need to be really good about criticism.

The important thing, Aly, is that you're writing and you're getting an audience. I suggest you write as much as you can, save it in a Word program, print it out and ask your English teacher to review it so that you can do the fine tuning.

But don't stop! And see all criticisms as wonderful gifts to help you become the best writer you can be!