Looks good to me, just a few minor editing comment. One being that it was one big paragraoph and I stopped reading halfway through. An overworked HR person with hundreds of resumes would stop too. Breaking it up gives her relief from all the words and she can easily scan the page to get all the info.

I also thinnk you should leave out the hearing issue. It might intimidate someone. My dad has Cerebral Palsy and can not use a computer for long (because the montior causes seisures) and once he removed it from his cover letter, he got some interviews.

To Mr. Xxxxxxx,

As a graduate from The Ohio State University with a Bachelors of Art degree from the College of Arts, I am looking for an opportunity to utilize my creativity, art education, and photography training. With this background and practical experience, I feel I would be an ideal candidate for the Bbbbbb position. I greatly appreciate your consideration and look forward to meeting you. I am eager to illustrate my creativity and capabilities in the art/multimedia/entertainment field **

I am sure you'll find that my resume covers all of the qualifications you are looking for. I genuinely look forward to hearing from you, and I would appreciate your initial contact be made via email.

Sincerely,


**(narrow this down to be specific about the job you're applying for... remove entertainment if its not involved in that particular job, etc).