Only one thing I would change. The shadow to the right of his nose is too dark, and runs into his eyebrow. Can you lighten the shadow?
Other than that - it's really good. Obviously I could never do something like that since I'm not at all artistically gifted. I can't draw a decent stick figure.
I can lighten it, and I will certainly play around with that...but the reference picture [which is saved to my comp and I might have to upload it] is ALMOST that dark. I think the shadow may end a little too abruptly, though.
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