Drawing/shading...stuff :]

[Karen]

I'd add more midrange shading - maybe it is there, but it's hard to tell from the image you posted, so that the "highlights" - as in the blank areas - really stand out, and are not the majority of the ribbon. Does that make sense? Again, maybe you have already done this, but we cannot tell on that jpg?

[JuniorxMyxLove]

I think i get what you're saying. sorry the pictures were blurry

I'm not done, i was just seeing how it was looking so far. i'm actually off to work on it some more..

and i did most of that with a mechanical pencil in geometry the other day so yeahhhh.

I'll try to get a better pic of it :]