drawing improvements?

[JuniorxMyxLove]

thanks guys
I'm so happy right now!
plus, my mouth doesn't hurt very much right now!

oh, and by the way - I did that whole drawing with a 2H pencil

[slleipnir]

looks great. not sure if anyone mentioned this, but do you have a smudge stick? or even atissue works. Just blend the pencil together and make it look smooth. (although you'll need to rework the darker areas a lot when you do this)

[JuniorxMyxLove]

no, i don't. but uhm, i did part of another one. this took me almost an hour to do. I spent waay more time on this then I did on any others. Please, what can I do to make it betteR? any suggestions here to put shading on the face? And are the boots okay? I did this whole thing in my room, so I couldn't exactly remember.

thanks a bunch!
and now for the picture: