Home work help needed ASAP.

[mugsy]

I like the subject, however, I'm not sure it "controversial" enough to be able to write that kind of essay. I would also suggest BSL or puppy mills or something like that.

Also, I read your answer to the first part of the question and it was good, however, the teacher in me found a tiny boo boo...instead of "amount" of litters, it should be "number" of litters. But, you can definitely tell that you are passionate about your subject. Excellent that you are willing to speak for those who can't.

[mike001]

I agree with Goodnow--this is a worthwhile subject to present an essay about. I totally agree that the breeding laws are non existant in this country. anyone who decides to call themselves a breeder and owns a bitch can just turn out litters as they see fit. In germany you can't breed unless your dog has passed rigorous temperament testing and has its working titles. I don't approve of the free for all attitude we take in America, that's what fills the shelters. You could do a lot of educating with an essay on this subject.

[Flatcoatluver]

Thanks mugsy. I appreciate the teacher side of you and I will change that part on my essay.

Mike, I wish I could live in Germany for that law. I am trying a new subject just because it might be easier for me.

The only person that will see this is my teacher, so it's not like I will be changing any minds for this final. But I did keep the part I wrote in my documents because you never know when that might come in handy.

[buckner]

I apologize if I repeat someone, I didn't have a chance to look at all of the replies.

Your topic seems to broad. Animals should be fixed at a certain age, and then also breeders should have to take a test. Focus in on one point, maybe how the poor BYB's contribute greatly to the numerous amounts of homeless animals, or something about animals being fixed. It just seems to broad, too vague. If I were to write about both of those ideas, I'd be writing for 20 pages.