Well.. I could word it, or at least try...
To who it may concern:
Hi, My pet forum and myself have been looking at your site, and I don't mean to sound cruel or rude or anything, but I have a few comments about your site and your Pits. First of all, I find some of the music a bit offensive. You may like it, but alot of people like myself find it very offensive, especially on a site such as this. Second off, I find it quite hard to read your writing sometimes. I guess you want to have your site look a bit more professional, so how about a spell checker?Third, and most importantly, it looks as though you enjoy breeding your dogs, but I think you do it for all the wrong reasons. I don't really see any Champion lines in your dog's pedigree, so What's the use of breeding them?
They do look extremely happy though, but do you show? Are they champions? Why do you breed them? You may think you're bettering the breed, but I honestly think you're not. As I said I'm not trying to sound rude, I'm just trying to offer some advice.
Sincerely,
So and So..







Third, and most importantly, it looks as though you enjoy breeding your dogs, but I think you do it for all the wrong reasons. I don't really see any Champion lines in your dog's pedigree, so What's the use of breeding them?
They do look extremely happy though, but do you show? Are they champions? Why do you breed them? You may think you're bettering the breed, but I honestly think you're not. As I said I'm not trying to sound rude, I'm just trying to offer some advice. 
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