Sounds great! Do you want to mention that your rescue strives to find perfect matches and even performs in-home visits to ensure the match is ideal for both the animal and family involved? I thought this was a wonderful aspect of your rescue that showed compassion above and beyond what any pet store would do! But, as always, some people might question the neccessity of home visits... just a thought.

Either way, its thoughtful and nicely written and I think it will help a lot!