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    twas the night before the dog show. (poem)

    Ok so in english we had to write a poem that resemples something we like to do, but, also copies twas the ngiht before christmas, so here what i got hope you enjoy!


    Twas the night before the dog show, and all through the house
    not a dog was stirring, not even a mouse
    the leashes were hung on the wall
    in hope that a first place would call
    the dogs were rested all curled in thier beds
    while visions of dog treats danced in thier heads.
    the dogs with the toys, and I at bay
    Just settled down for a long day
    when all of the sudden there arose a clatter
    The dogs sprang from there bed to see whats the matter
    Away to the window they ran and barked
    when they saw another dog that had just marked


    so what ya think???
    Last edited by Flatcoatluver; 12-09-2005 at 08:04 PM.
    Thanks so much Ashley for the siggy!
    Zoey Marie NAJ NA RN (flat-coated retriever)
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    T.j (english setter)

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    Cute, good job!

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    Oh that was so cute! lol I liked it
    "To all the dogs I've loved before...Who traveled in & out my door...I'm glad you came along...I dedicate this song to all the dogs I've loved before"

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    I really liked it. Great job.
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    that's relly good! x I can't write poems lol

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    I love it! Especially the last line! Good job

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    That was adorable! Very creative ending! Ho ho ho!!!

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    That is very cute.

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    thanks!!
    Thanks so much Ashley for the siggy!
    Zoey Marie NAJ NA RN (flat-coated retriever)
    Wynset's Sam I AM "Sage" RA (shetland sheepdog)
    T.j (english setter)

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    You wrote a really good poem



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