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    Rough Draft of a poem

    Here is a poem I wrote today. It's only the rough draft but I hope you like it. It's about the crazy things we do for kitties and how we love them anyway.


    Cat Motor Purr Music

    For some reason
    you seem to think
    that 3 AM is a reasonable
    time to jump on my chest
    and make happy feet on me
    (Claws extended)
    And what gives you the idea
    that I need you to clean
    my forehead
    with your sandpaper tongue?
    (Don't you think it would be more helpful
    if you cleaned more than just one spot?)
    Okay, I understand
    you don't want your bowl to go empty
    but could you please at least make a show
    of eating more than two bites
    when I refill your dish
    at midnight?
    But, god, I love you
    With all your hairball
    litterwasting ways
    and I'll sleep now
    that you're bathed, fed
    (Wait - are you bathing again?)
    Listening to the roar
    of your cat motor purr music.

    --Zana Durbin
    "Cat Motor Purr Music"
    March 31, 2005
    Proud meowmy of Weezie, Eepie, Grey Girl and Neko...or Weezer Peezer, Eepie Peepie, Grey Grey and Neko the Gecko as they are commonly known!

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    very nice poem, and very true as well!!!! thanks for posting it!

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    why do you ignore the food
    that you loved just yesterday
    why do you have to cover the floor with litter
    and the poop,is exposed,by the way
    and why,can you pass by each other
    countless times,without reaction
    then make The Found Cat Hotel
    look like a Nuclear reaction.
    I liked your poem,better actually
    The Found Cats,think,that this should be covered,in Pee!
    THE RAINBOW BRIDGE FOUND HOTEL ANGELS HAVE A NEW FRIEND IN CORINNA.


    ALMOND ROCCA BATON AND ELLIE ANGELS ARE GUARDIANS TO ETERNAL KITTENS ROCC-EL AND T TEEN ANGEL, ALMOND ROCA , VLAD , PAWLEE , SPRITE. LITTLE HEX, OSIRIS AND ANNIE ANGELS.
    EBONY BEAU TUBSTER AND PEACHES BW SPIKE & SMOKEY


    NOW PRECIOUS AND SAM ARE TOGETHER WITH ETERNAL KITTENS SAMMY ,PRESLEY, SYLVESTER AND SCRATCHY JR , MIGHTY MARINA, COSMIC CARMEN, SAMSON ,UNDER KITTY AND SUNKIST AUTUMN & PUMPKIN.
    MIA AND ORANGE BLOSSOM ANGELS HAVE ADOPTED TUXIE , TROOPER , SONGBIRD AND LITTLE BITTY KITTIES MIA-MI BLOSSOMER, TUXEDO AND DASH AS THIER ETERNAL KITTENS.
    PRINCESS JOSEPH AND MICHAEL ARE CELEBRATING 19 YEARS AS LUCKY FOUND CATS

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    Thank you! I'm glad you both enjoyed it. I'm not used to writing poetry about my kitties - normally I write about sensitive issues and political things. But I couldn't help be feel inspired yesterday by three furry muses!
    Proud meowmy of Weezie, Eepie, Grey Girl and Neko...or Weezer Peezer, Eepie Peepie, Grey Grey and Neko the Gecko as they are commonly known!

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