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    In the ghetto of Vilna.. *My story*

    I made a new one, one less boring, or i think so.. Here it is, its called :: In the ghetto of Vilna

    We had lived in the ghetto of Vilna for my whole life, As long as I can remember.. They wanted to take me away from it all, the german.. What did the jewish do to deserve so much? Thoughts like that raced through my mind maybe more than 50 times a day.. I live here with papa, my older sister, Lena, and my mother, we only had a small space, the size of an attack, but then again It was very hard to get into the ghetto, to get a space the size of most germans family room, you just had to show the certificate. If you had the certificate, they let you in through the gate. So more than five thousand people got into Vilna.

    We had ten thousand Jewish people in the two ghettos. The people that did not, get this yellow certificate, about 3,500 of them, were sent to the orphanage, the old-age home, even the the elderly, the sick, the children from many families, and many, many people that they came to their home last and there was no more room in the ghetto. They were put into the city synagogues, in the shulen, as we called it, in the shul.. So, without that simple piece of paper, you couldnt live in the ghetto or get out. I would give anything to live anywhere else, to eat like the other people in the cities, to have a real meal instead of a piece of bread each night, or to have as much water as I wanted, but god put us here for a reason, I believed, if he wanted us somewhere else, not to be jewish, then I would be there now.. Every evening I took walks to papa’s shop, or what used to be papa’s.. He had a candy shop. I still remember all the times me and lena would help papa, we often helped papa make many things.. Mama would come in on occasion and help us.. Papa showed us how to make taffy, choclates, many candies..

    But I drifted back from the sweet taste of caramel and sweets, and came into reality, looking around, I remeber what used to be the town.. Pretty white buildings with colorful signs, painted to perfection, cars parked picking up whatever it may be in the store, then the real thing became visual.. I looked around blocking the sun out of my eyes and, what I saw wasnt white buildings, colorful signs, cars, or roads, what I saw was dirt instead road, brown knocked down buildings, which used to be as tall as the sky, or how I saw them, the colorful signs now marked with profane words towards the jewish. I looked down at the ground, now full of brown dirt, and cried.. I screamed “Why us! Why! God why!” I demanded an answer, but I knew I would never get an answer, not from lena, not from mama, or papa, not even god..
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    MORE!! I like it alot! Its awsome! more more more!
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    Great story!! More!

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    Here is an update for those of you who were reading!

    I screamed “Why us! Why! God why!” I demanded an answer, but I knew I would never get an answer, not from lena, not from mama, or papa, not even god.. I stared at the ground for awhile.. I must have drifted off, because when I awoke I was on the floor, lying down.. I quickly stood up, reached in my pocket and took out papa’s pocket watch and looked at the time.. Oh god.. It was 9:30.. Thats past the curfew in Vilna.. If the jewish are seen out of there houses past 8:00 the german will take us back to their camp, where they all met, to dicuss the problems throughout the ghetto... I tried to walk as fast as I could, passing papas candy shop, looking down at the ground only.. I would get caught easily because of the bright yellow star on my coat.. It had a big J on it.. Jew.. I looked ahead and my house came into vision.. I looked around and picked up pace.. Walking faster, more cautiously.. “Hey! You there! Stop!” I froze right where I was, a few feet from my house and stood, my heart beating hard in my chest.. I wondered if he would hear it.. The flashlight shone bright in my eyes.. I tried to use my hand to block it.

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    MORE! MORE! MORE!

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    A little bit more::

    “Whats your name you fithy jew?” said the german.. I stumbled “My name is Liza.. I live here in Vilna.” I looked over at him.. He was dressed neatly, his shoes neatly polished, his clothes wrinkle free, not torn, unlike mine.. “Do you know what time it is Jew?” I wondered why he insisted on calling me jew, I told him my name.. “Yes sir, I just.. I mean.. I took a walk in the evening and drifted to sleep..” I said..

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    I hope noone has lost intrest.. Is it getting boring?

    Last Post:: “Whats your name you fithy jew?” said the german.. I stumbled “My name is Liza.. I live here in Vilna.” I looked over at him.. He was dressed neatly, his shoes neatly polished, his clothes wrinkle free, not torn, unlike mine.. “Do you know what time it is Jew?” I wondered why he insisted on calling me jew, I told him my name.. “Yes sir, I just.. I mean.. I took a walk in the evening and drifted to sleep..” I said..End last post

    I said.. He looked me in the eye, then at the bright yellow star on my shirt.. “Next time a german soldier wont be this nice, where is your house?” said the german.. “Straight ahead..” He gestured me to go, so I walked away, as fast as I could walk.. I breathed deeply.. I walked in the door to find everyone surrounded by the little round table we ate at, when we had meals.. I looked around and looked down at the floor.. Lena pulled me to the side while everyone was still talking. Noone noticed I was even here.. “Liza! Where have you been?! Mama and Papa have been worried sick about you!” said Lena.. “I took a walk down to papa’s shop, and I must have cried myself to sleep, you havent seen what it looks like there Lena! You remember the old city! Me? I’ve seen the wrecked buildings, the rood remarks on the signs! You haven’t!” I cried.. “Ok liza, ok..” She hugged me tightly and told me it would all be over soon, and took me up back to my bed, “Go to sleep liza, it will all be over soon” Lena was such a form of comfort to me when I was upset, she was more like my mother than my real mother was..

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    It's really good so far Amber. Keep it up.

    “I like too many things and get all confused and hung-up running
    from one falling star to another till i drop. This is the night, what it does to you.
    I had nothing to offer anybody except my own confusion.”
    - Jack Kerouac; On The Road

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    Good good. Great job! Keep going.

    Ps. What inspired you to write this?

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    Originally posted by popcornbird
    Good good. Great job! Keep going.

    Ps. What inspired you to write this?
    I finished reading a story called Torn Thread, And i decided i wanted to write a story on something that intrests me!


    Teeny tiny update!'

    After she left, I decided to go and look out the window.. I sat on the windowsill and noticed something strange.. Something wasnt right.. There were trucks parked all throughout the dirt road.. As I looked more closely I noticed there we actually people standing near the trucks, from the looks of it germans..

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    Great story!

    Have you ever read The Cage? It sounds like that lol.
    I've been BOO'd!

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    Originally posted by wolfsoul
    Great story!

    Have you ever read The Cage? It sounds like that lol.
    Nope! Thanks jordan! Your story is also amazing!

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    Originally posted by CamCamPup33
    Nope! Thanks jordan! Your story is also amazing!
    Thanks!
    I've been BOO'd!

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