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    A new Story, im writing..

    Tell me if this is boring, This is just for fun, but if its boring, soooooorrrry!!

    "Jamie, up now!" I could hear mom yelling right in my ear.. "Ugh.. 10 more minutes, come on!" I heard her walk away, SCORE! I closed my eyes and went back to sleep, and when i woke up it was 9:45, ten minutes after i should have already been in school.. I got up, pulled off the covers, and stepped onto the hard wood floor.. My room was a diaster, clothes everywhere, but hey, i needed a maid or something to clean it up, right? I walked out to the kitchen where the wood turned tile, and looked around.. Where was mom? Huh, she must have went to work already.. I opened the fridge and took out the gallon of orange juice.. I didnt bother to get a cup, just drank.. As i closed it, i noticed moms hand writing on the door of the fridge on the dry erase board.. It said "Jamie, get to school, i dont have time to drive you, i told you i had a meeting at 9 for a new law office, be at school, i dont care if you walk.. Be there!" Mom and her law office, she's always there, no matter what time.. It's like she doenst have time for me, just her office.. I went back to my room and got dressed, i put on a nice tight white spagetti strap shirt, with a pink jacket over it, a pair of tight white pants, and pink shoes.. I grabbed my bookbag and headed for what i called the hell hole..

    Should i keep going?

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    Yes, MORE!

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    Looks good so far -pokes- Keep going



    My babies: Josie, Zeke, Kiba, Shadow (AKA Butter)

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    yep! it's good!

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    Yeah, it's really good Amber! Write more
    Dayna, Alex, Phoebe, Cleo, Rolo, Scooter, & Holly

    Thank you so much Popcornbird!

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    Of course you should keep going! Its really good!
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    Hehe, thanks! Ill write some more in a bit... See my sig? Ebby, i miss her .. Sorry, back to subject..

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    Aww, Ebany is such a beautiful girl! So sorry you couldn't take her
    - - Tiffany && Blueberry - -

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    OMG I love your storys!! haha number 1 fan!! Keep Writing!
    ~*~green_chameleon_girl~*~
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    Thanks MANDAMOO!!!!

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    I like it!Write more!
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    Originally posted by green_chameleon_girl
    OMG I love your storys!! haha number 1 fan!! Keep Writing!
    Thanks! LOL!

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    Write more
    ~*~green_chameleon_girl~*~
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    R.I.P Rex
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    Thanks MANDAMOO!!!!

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    Ok, Ok, But only a little, Because im off to school!

    As I walked towards the door, i wondered if i should even go.. I mean, school gets out at 2:30, and mom gets off of work at 7:00, mostly at the earliest.. I'll stay home, and mom will never know the difference.. I ran through the kitchen, through down my bookbag, took off my jacket and into my bed i went.. Ahh, so comfy.. I fell back asleep and when i woke up it was night.. I never thought i could sleep so long! I heard someone rummaging around in the kitchen.. I looked at my clock, it really couldn't be mom, it's only 6, her work is about hour away unless she left early.. Huh.. I got up and walked over to the kitchen peering over at every corner.. I walked into the kitchen and what i found amazed me and made me gasp.. I covered my mouth, and i could tell my eyes were guled open... I cant believe that he is here..

    She looked like this LOL!

    Thats all guys, ill keep ya guessing!

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    School at this hour? It's only 5:22!
    MORE!

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    lol, it's 8:30 here!

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