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I ran outside and wandered around on the sidewalks looking around.. There was a lady walking her dog, and i yelled to her "Please help, something is wrong with my mom, please help me!" She looked at me funny and said "Por Que?" Great. She didnt understand me.. I rolled my eyes and ran back to my house.. I passed mom on the floor and picked up the phone while keeping one eye on mom as if she was going to get up and walk away.. I dialed 911.. "Hello, fire resuce, how may i help you?" said the operator.. "My mom..Shes... i dont know whats wrong with her... She is just laying on the floor, shes not moving and she has a knife in her hand, but i see no wounds.." i cried.. "Okay, calm down, tell us where you live, give us your address" "8875 Nw 82nd way" "Okay, hold tight sweetie" "Okay." I Stood there, i felt cold, and closed in.. I couldnt breathe, and all i saw were images of people, people who were dying.. I was scared, i didn't know why im seeing these people... I heard the sirens and the fire truck and sighed, i could only hear them, i cant see them, but i hear them, i ran to the door, stumbling, stopping, and rubbing my head, I opened the door, and noone was there.. Everything came back to vision and i looked around, mom wasnt there.. She wasn't in the spot she was laying in anymore, for some reason this gave me the creeps.. I heard and saw the real sirens and fire trucks come into vision, the paramedics rushing out with bags.. And into my door, "Where is she" One paramedic asked.. "I dont know.." I looked to the floor, and began "She was there when i called you, i think, and when i came over here, she was gone, i saw things, i saw people dying, i heard sirens.." "Is this a prank?" "No." They searched the house and mom was nowhere in sight, no where.. .That means mom must have faked it, to try to get away, i dont know why, i was just so confused.. The paramedic turned to me and said "Where is your father?" "He doesn't live here, i dont know where or what he is doing." "Alright, then you need to come with us.. Go pack up some stuff, you wont be coming back" Thats it! Thats why mom pretended to be dead, because she didnt want to take me to whereever we were going to go, maybe where they take me, is the same place mom was going to take me.. "I already have" I got my stuff, and followed them out i took one last look at my house and walked away from it forever..

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I had my head stuck to the window, watching outside, hoping maybe i could sneak out or something.. We pulled up to Kid Orphanage of Society.. I got out of the car, it was pouring rain now.. I walked up the steps, The paramedic behind me with my stuff, "Normally it isn't my duty to bring you here but..." "Then why did you?" I asked.. "I want to stay home, at my house" "It will be better for you here, you will meet new people, my mom even works here, she will help you like your own mother.." I sighed and looked up at the sign.. Kid Orphanage of Society.. What a great name.. I walked in, i was cold from the rain.. My hair was dripping and my shoes were squeaking.. I walked up to the desk, looking behind me to make sure the paramedic had my things.. "Hi, im new here, um.. Im Jamie.." "Hello jamie! Nice to have a new face here! This is my daugter Lynn.." She waved, i smiled and waved back.. "Sweetie, ill get all the information from this man here, Lynn show her to her new room.." She waved for me to come with her, and i followed..

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I Followed her up 3 long flights of steps, having to carry my own suitcase because the paramedic was down telling the lady "My terrible tradegy" It was so nice here, the hallways were a golden brown color, with all the windows the color shimmered off onto the doors.. The door knobs were brass, and curled at the tips to make a little spiral ending.. Lynn turned to me and talked (for the first time, might i add) smiled and said, "I think you will like this room, when i was here i did.." She winked at me and opened the door, i stood in amazement.. I was in heaven, i really was!

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I stared at the bed, it was better than my own! This bed was round and had curtains draped over.. The walls were a dark almond color and their were windows upon windows.. Lynn grinned at me.. I grinned back.. "Like it?" she said.. I shook my head, "I would be crazy not to!" I laughed and ran into my new home.. I was holding back my tears, realizing i had no mom.. Im in an orphanage, and all i can do was be happy? How was that? I sat on my bed.. Lynn laughed "Ill be downstairs! I live only a few rooms down, me and my mother stay here, its out home.. So feel free to drop in, and ill do the same.." I smiled.. "Sure.." She closed my door, and uh oh, the tears flowed.. I miss my mom.. I miss MY home.. Knock, knock.. "Come in.. I looked up to the door.. It was the paramedic.. "I just wanted to give you these" He handed me my bags.. "Ill keep in touch.." I nodded, "Ok".. He closed the door, and i got up and got my bags.. I unpacked for awhile, Putting things on bookshelves and so, knock, knock..

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-Two days later-

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[Last update 1-26-04]
I stared at the bed, it was better than my own! This bed was round and had curtains draped over.. The walls were a dark almond color and their were windows upon windows.. Lynn grinned at me.. I grinned back.. "Like it?" she said.. I shook my head, "I would be crazy not to!" I laughed and ran into my new home.. I was holding back my tears, realizing i had no mom.. Im in an orphanage, and all i can do was be happy? How was that? I sat on my bed.. Lynn laughed "Ill be downstairs! I live only a few rooms down, me and my mother stay here, its out home.. So feel free to drop in, and ill do the same.." I smiled.. "Sure.." She closed my door, and uh oh, the tears flowed.. I miss my mom.. I miss MY home.. Knock, knock.. "Come in.. I looked up to the door.. It was the paramedic.. "I just wanted to give you these" He handed me my bags.. "Ill keep in touch.." I nodded, "Ok".. He closed the door, and i got up and got my bags.. I unpacked for awhile, Putting things on bookshelves and so, knock, knock..
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"Come in.." I said.. About 15 girls trampled into my new room, almost knocking over the bookshelf that was provided with my room.. I was wide eyed, and confused.. "Um, hi." i said.. "HI" they all screamed.. They all started laughing.. "Can i help you?" I said "No." They all screamed again.. A girl from the back that looked just about my age, came up to me, looked back at the girls and rolled her eyes.. "Sorry about them, they are much younger than us.." She smiled.. "Just dont mind them.. Im glad to have someone here my age, so im not stuck with them" She said it quietly so know one would here her.. I giggled.. "We wanted to welcome you.. So.. Welcome.." She said, and smiled.. "OH! Sorry, i forgot to even tell you who i was.. My name is Carissa.. Cary for short.. I have been here longer than anyone here.." "Hi Carissa.. Im jamie, i just got here, obviously.." She laughed.. "I need to get going, its lunch for these kids! Ill come and get you when we can go down, they seperate us by ages, the Boys only join us for dinner, and we go somewhere else for classes, boys and girls have seprate sleeping bunks.. See ya soon!" I waved bye, and she turned and left.. I smiled to myself and sighed.. I missed my best friend, Ellie, I wondered if i should call her and even begin to tell her what happened.. Carissa said we have classes.. What kind of classes i wonder..
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