story i started writing please tell me what you think
okay so here it is plaese tell me what you think of it
BLACK SCARLETT
MY FATHER'S FATHER HAD BEEN ONE OF THE MOST FAMOUS HORSE AND CATTLE RANCHERS OF HIS TIME. WHICH HE PASSED DOWN TO HIS SON .. MY FATHER WHICH MY FATHER WOULD PASS DOWN TO HIS SON. BUT MY FATHER DID NOT HAVE A SON HE HAD ME A DAUGHTER WHICH HE LOVED WITH ALL HIS HEART BUT THOUGHT OF ME AS A FRAGILE FLOWER THAT WOULD WILT IF TOUCHED EVER SINCE I WAS LITTLE I HAD TO PROVE MYSELF WORTHY SO THAT I COULD SOMEDAY TAKE OVER THE RANCH. ONE OF MY BIGGEST AND MOST MEMERABLE TRAILS CAME ONE YEAR WHEN WE BROUGHT THE YEARLINGS IN TO WEAN AND GENTLE THEM AND HERE IS THAT STORY......................
SHE WAS BLACK AS ACE OF SPADES AND AS FIRERY AS A BADGER. SHE HAD ONE WHITE SOCK AND A SOLID WHITE HEAD. SHE WAS PERFECT MY DREAM HORSE. BUT SHE HAD ONE PROBLEM HER EYES WERE ....BLUE . I SAW NO PROBLEM IN THIS I THO8UGHT THEY WERE GORGOUS. BUT MY FATHER WAS A FIRM BELIIEVER THAT GLASS EYES WENT THEY WERE CRAZY. I WAS FOURTEEN AT THE TIME AND BLACK SCARLETT AS I CALLED HER WAS A YEARLING I HAD NEVER SEEN A SMARTER FILLY.ANYWAYS MOTHER CONVINCED FATHER TO LET ME HAVE A GO AT HER. SHE TOLD HIM HOW MUCH I LOVED HER . HE PROTESTED THAT I WAS A GIRL THAT A YOUNG MAN SHOULD DO THE JOB FOR ME. WITH THOSE WORDS DETERMINATION WAS SET IN ME. THE NEXT DAY I WENT OUT TO THE CORRAL THAT BLACK SCARLETT WAS IN. AS I APPROACHED THE FENCE SHE REARED UP ANT THAT WAS WHEN I SAW IT . I LOOKED DEEP INTO HER EYES AND SAW FEAR . AS I LOOKED DEEPER INTO HER EYES IT WAS AS IF SHE HAD A WALL BLOCKING MY ENTRANCE. AS IF THE DOOR WAS LOCKED AND ME WITH NO KEY. BUT I WAS DETERMINED TO GET THAT KEY NO MATTER HOW LONG IT TOOK......
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