Disclaimers for Pet Resume Website - help with words

Hi - just wanted some feedback on whether there is a better way to word these. I will get them vetted by a lawyer (wonder how much THAT will cost!), but just for clarity, would appreciate input.

Thanks!:)

http://www.prefurredpetresume.com/


Prefurred Tenant Pet Resume (PTPR) verifies that the information contained in its resumes is true and accurate to the best of its knowledge and ability at the time the information was collected and presented. PTPR is not liable for any changes in animal behaviour or owner actions occurring after the date this resume was prepared.

The resumes prepared by PTPR are intended to assist pet owners in obtaining pet-friendly housing, but are not guaranteed to obtain housing for the owners.

All pet owners are responsible for contacting their municipal bylaw department regarding the type and number of pets they are permitted to own in their particular area. PTPR is not responsible for any breaches of any local animal bylaws.

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The resumes prepared by PTPR are intended to assist pet owners in obtaining pet-friendly housing, but are not guaranteed to obtain housing for the owners.

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I don't know about wording, but you don't need the comma in that sentence.

THE REAL TROUBLE IS THAT WHEN SOME PEOPLE GET A KITTEN OR A PUPPY, THAT ALLS WELL, BUT PEOPLE TODAY ARE ATTENTION DEFICENT, AND TIRE OF THINGS QUICKLY, AND DONT WANT ANYTHING THAT THEY AHVE TO WORK ON.
I WISH YOU LUCK , AND AT LEAST IF THEY READ THAT DOCUMENT, THAT TEY WONT TAKE IN A PET WHO REQUIRES LOVE, AND A MATURE GUARDIAN TO WATCH OUT FOR THEM.
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