Have a go at this:

I have a video of my drawings, and I want to see what you guys think of them:
Honest critiques, please. If you think they're horrible and I need to step away from the pencil, tell me.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D2-kz8_WnGw
Please, don't hold back on ANYTHING. I only want to improve!

Thanks!

Well, I can honestly say don't put down your pencils!! They are good, and they got better toward the end. It looks like you are improving as time goes on. Keep it up and you will someday be as good as your grandfather.
As it stands you are MUCH better at drawing than I am. :)

haha when I firsdt read that I thought it said "I can honestly say put down your pencils" and I was like NOOOO then i reread it and got all happy :]

Thanks :]

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