A Little Poem describing Life...

Written by Me:

Nobody will hold you

Nobody will love you

They just dont care

Imagine a world

without pain and sorrow

without hurt, death, and only love

everyone woudl be happy

everyone would be spirited

all happy, all loved, all cherished forever

no war, no charred battlefields, no starvation

everyone would be rich, and prosperous

everyone would have a job

Everyone would suffer no more

The world is not such a place

it is filled with madness, death, starvation,

and so much more.

Why can't we all get along?

Because we're stupid.

We're careless beasts.

We rape people, we kill people,

we abuse animals, we abuse people,

We hurt people, we do unimaginable things.

Look how terrible we are.

--(c)Briana P.

*SIGH* makes me wonder whos the real 'animals' in this world

*clapping*
Great Poem couldn't of said it better myself.
Wish it wasn't so true :(

Good poem.

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Originally Posted by Vette

*SIGH* makes me wonder whos the real 'animals' in this world

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Ditto!

Great poem, Bri!

You Might Like John Lennon's Song "imagine"

I wrote it very randomly. Thanks everyone! :)

Yay! Poetry! :D I love poetry that doesn't try to hide anything. You need to share your poems more, this is the first poem that I've read that you've wrote.
Good job^^!

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Originally Posted by Chilli

Yay! Poetry! :D I love poetry that doesn't try to hide anything. You need to share your poems more, this is the first poem that I've read that you've wrote.
Good job^^!

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Lol. I didn't think anybody would want to read them :p but thanks!

Good poem. I must say it is rather negative. I think there is more to life than that!

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Originally Posted by CagneyDog

Good poem. I must say it is rather negative. I think there is more to life than that!

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Yes, but, that's the bad part of the world...I should write a continuation to show the happy part of the world I guess :p

That's a good peom Bri. you should take off your full name becuase people that are just browsing around can find you even though people on PT are nice and great just people who are like browsing here if you know what I mean. Great poem again lol yes you need to share some of your poems.

Took off my lastname :D I'll try to write another one for you guyyssss.
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Darkness fading into Morning
Sea fading into Shore
Stone crushed into gravel
Hopes crushed into Mourn
Turning from Solid into a Dusty Path
Crushed Dreams, Broken Hearts
Mourning through the night
Under the midnight sky
hearts a beating slow
Running from a Panic
to Giving up at all
Never wanting to let it go
Searching for the truth
Crushed hearts a broken
and dying down to now
Silent Whispers
Silent Tears
Silence throughout the world.

Sorta random..lol

You are a very good poetry writer! :D Good poems!

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Originally Posted by Crazy-Cat-Lover

You are a very good poetry writer! :D Good poems!

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Thanks :D
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Here's another one

She licks me in the face
She hugs me when I weep
She's my precious guardian
My protector whilst I sleep
She's always there with me
In mind, heart, and soul
She is my angel, my heart
My soulmate
Some will call her mutt
Others will call her dog
But I will always call her
My best friend