View Full Version : twas the night before the dog show. (poem)

12-09-2005, 07:40 PM
Ok so in english we had to write a poem that resemples something we like to do, but, also copies twas the ngiht before christmas, so here what i got hope you enjoy! :D

Twas the night before the dog show, and all through the house
not a dog was stirring, not even a mouse
the leashes were hung on the wall
in hope that a first place would call
the dogs were rested all curled in thier beds
while visions of dog treats danced in thier heads.
the dogs with the toys, and I at bay
Just settled down for a long day
when all of the sudden there arose a clatter
The dogs sprang from there bed to see whats the matter
Away to the window they ran and barked
when they saw another dog that had just marked

so what ya think???

12-09-2005, 07:47 PM
Cute, good job! :)

12-09-2005, 08:01 PM
Oh that was so cute! lol I liked it :)

12-09-2005, 08:21 PM
I really liked it. :D Great job.

12-10-2005, 06:54 AM
that's relly good! x I can't write poems :D lol

12-10-2005, 08:34 AM
I love it! Especially the last line! Good job :)

12-10-2005, 03:20 PM
That was adorable!:) Very creative ending! Ho ho ho!!!:D

Ginger's Mom
12-10-2005, 04:38 PM
That is very cute. :)

12-10-2005, 10:10 PM
thanks!! :D

12-10-2005, 11:05 PM
You wrote a really good poem :)