PDA

View Full Version : I need your help...



ILoveMyAbbyGirl
04-27-2005, 08:41 PM
I have to write this poem for my American Lit class, and it has to be about me. I'm absolutely STUCK... and don't know what to write. If you could, just say some stuff you know about me, or what you think of me, etc. I just need some ideas! I'm so stumped. :p

Karen
04-27-2005, 08:43 PM
Write a poem about the things you love! Critters, people, sunrises, whatever!

ILoveMyAbbyGirl
04-27-2005, 09:38 PM
And I can't find a poem I need as a reference... It's by Walt Whittman, and I don't know what it's called, but it is a long story about him and his life, like what I have to do. If anyone knows what its called or can help me find it, I'd love you forever!

ILoveMyAbbyGirl
04-27-2005, 09:41 PM
Just kidding, I found it... :p Maybe I'll post the poem when I'm done. I have to read it in front of class and I'm panicking... :(

Vette
04-28-2005, 12:23 AM
Oh lord. thats what i HATED the most about school. i literalty felt my blood pressure sky rocket when my name was called.

but hey,, i wish you the very best of luck!

ILoveMyAbbyGirl
04-28-2005, 01:25 AM
Here's the final poem. Wish me luck tomorrow!


Age sixteen.
Barely an adult, still acts like a child.
Guitar strings, radios, sheets of music,
just a touch of what I am.
Pajama pants, hoodies and socks,
my usual weekend attire.
A non-stop job
on the move all the time,
trying to keep up
with my nephew running down the hall.
Almost two, the love of my life,
yet the biggest burden of staying home on a Saturday night.
My camera is my favorite
piece of technology, a window to
a world that offers no criticism,
no lies, no problems.
Shy and quiet,
but loud and obnoxious
only when I need to be.
This is what I am
barely an adult at
age sixteen.

Soapets
04-28-2005, 05:44 AM
I think that's a WONDERFUL poem! You have nothing to worry about!:)

4 Dog Mother
04-28-2005, 04:13 PM
Great poem, Megan. I was going to suggest you include something about Gavin, great aunt that you are!!!!

cookieluver7
04-28-2005, 05:32 PM
That is a wonderful poem!!:D

manda_moo87
04-28-2005, 10:08 PM
Wow. That's really good, I love it!