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KayAnn
09-13-2001, 06:38 PM
Times are changing
Its seem so long
since weve been struck with peace
They tell me to remain strong
tears crawl down my face
as they continue to fight about religion and race
Someday oh i pray
all of this fighting will go away
depression is setting and overtaken
as lives are cruely taken
as innocent as the people are
the terrorist dont care by far
they continue to have a ball
as the Twin Towers begin to crumble and fall
The heartless terrorist continue to kill
with happiness they fill
But the U.S. will make them pay the bill.


Im going to print this out and bring it to my Language Arts techer, she has been very angry with this whole situation and hey it might get me a few extra credit points!
Anyways, tell me what you think. I was just crying and began to write, and this is what came out....

jackiesdaisy1935
09-13-2001, 09:44 PM
KayAnn that is a wonderful poem, I think your teacher will love it and it should be good for an "A"
Jackie

Daisy's Mom
09-13-2001, 11:32 PM
Kay Ann, you have quite a maturity about you that many young peopel your age don't have. Your poem is beautiful and touching. This attack does not only hurt the adults. The children are hurting too.

KYS
09-14-2001, 12:35 AM
Beautifull KayAnn,

Your teacher will love it. : )

crow_noir
09-14-2001, 02:21 AM
hey, very good job on the poem!

that's how i wrote most of my poems, i got a thought or image in my head and i let the words take over.

KayAnn
09-14-2001, 02:23 AM
thanks on you comments i get very expressive when im depressed, and my words come out flowing like a river.... ;)