Another Story... =P

[FurMomx6]

OMG!! That story is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good! I just now read it tonight and I think it's awesome! I got teary eyed on some parts. You should seriously get it published. And we need MORE!!!! More I tell you!!!!

PS. Graham is soo sweet! Luv him! :) :)

[slleipnir]

Well..I only read the first page so far, but I like your writing. Also, I can say I know exactly how the main character feels. (Having someone close to you almost dying from anorexia) So yeah, it kinda made me sad..but its well writen none the less

[G.P.girl]

OMG! FURMOMX6! I JUST GOT SOME GOLDFISH YESTERDAY (I'LL POST PICS LATER) AND ONE OF THEM LOOKS JUST like one in you sig! i think it's Cho, but he looks exactly like that except he has orange lipstick!
just wanted to point that out:o


p.s. MORE!!!!
:D

[FurMomx6]

Cool! Goldfish are really neat. I used to have tropical fish but they kept dieing on me :( So I changed my tank to a Goldfish tank. I'm glad I did because my goldfish are awesome. Once I save my money up, I'm going to get a really big goldfish. :)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I'm sorry guys. I'm writing some right now and I just have lots going on. But lets not talk about it.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

He went out into the lobby outside my room and came back in with a rose in his mouth. I laughed as he put the rose next to me on my table and then went back out.
"Are you ready?" he asked.
"I guess." I said, nervously. He emerged with a box from the bridal shop where I saw my dress. I gasped and started to cry. He took the dress out of the box and held it up for me to see. It was exactly how I pictured it; it had the lace sash and the thin straps. I crawled out of my bed still crying and touched it. I couldn't believe he had actually gone out and bought it.
"Want to try it on?" he asked, with a kind, gentle smile on his face. I nodded and wiped the tears out of my eyes. I closed the door and stuck the sign on the handle. Graham helped me zip the back of the dress and then walked me to the mirror in the bathroom door. I looked at myself. For the first time in my entire life, I thought I looked beautiful.
I turned and looked at Graham. "How do I look?" I managed to say between tears.
"Beautiful as ever, Kersey." he reached up and pulled me close and kissed me. I looked at myself again in the mirror and smiled.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

bump

[G.P.girl]

whoa! where did he get the money to buy that?
i read a book that was alot like your story was in the beginning.i kept mixing them up and expecting graham to pop up somewhere:)
more!!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

"Beautiful as ever, Kersey." he reached up and pulled me close and kissed me. I looked at myself again in the mirror and smiled.
I carefully took the dress off and put my hospital gown back on. I crawled into bed and wiped the last few tears off my red cheeks.
"Thank you so much Graham." I said.
"Anything for you, Kersey." he said. "Listen. I talked to the doctor and he said you would be released tomorrow." he said smiling.
"Really? Finally! I've been waiting to get out of this place." I said. "Graham, look." I said, nodding towards the window. It was snowing.
"It's so beautiful outside." he said in an almost whisper. "I'd take you out if I could, but you're already sick." he said. He came and sat on the end of the bed.
"Please don't worry about how I got that dress, okay? It's all been worked out. It's okay." he said. He must have knew I was wondering.
"But please, can you tell me?" I asked pleadingly. He sighed and closed his eyes.
"Honey, I went to your parents and showed them the page you ripped out. They love you so much Kersey, they bought the dress for you." he said. I was shocked.
"Did you thank them for me?" I cried.
"Baby, calm down. Of course I did. They said they were willing to pay everything if we needed them to." he said. He was getting choked up. He had never met my parents before, but he had the courage to go to them and ask them for help.
"I cannot believe it." I said. I had been so cruel to them. I needed to call my mom. "I have to call her."
I grabbed the telephone off the bedside table and quickly dialed my mom and dad's house.
"Hello?" a voice said. It was my father.
"Dad? I-I want to thank you and mom. The dress. You didn't need to. I didn't need that dress." I said, swallowing hard.
"Baby, its the least we could do. Do you mind if your mother talks on the other line?" he asked.
"Put her on." I said. My mother picked up another phone.
"Kersey? Honey? What's wrong?" she said.
"Mom. Thank you so much for the dress! I didn't need it, really." I said. I could hear my mother crying.
"Kersey, I know I haven't always been there for you, but I am now, okay? I promise. I will always be there for you. You're... you're my baby girl." she said, hanging up the phone, sobbing.
"Can we come see you? Your mother has wanted to come, but she can't bear seeing you in the hospital. It makes her so overwhelmingly sad." he said. I could hear him comforting my mother in the background.
"Yes, please come." I said. "Listen, daddy, I'll talk to you when you come, okay?" I said. It was the first time I had called him daddy, in practically, my whole life. "Bring mom." I said, smiling. We both hung up.
"Graham, I want to thank you again. I think you have brought me and my parents closer now." I said, still smiling. I leaned over and kissed his forehead. "I love you so much." I said.

[petlover]

It is STILL good. We still love it. AND you know what? We still want.....



moremoremoremoremoremoremoremore:)

[FurMomx6]

It's soooo awesome!! Love it!

More please!!!;)

[G.P.girl]

OMg thats so sweet! it made me get a little teary eyed. awww graham is so sweet! adn her parents!:o

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Here's a smidge:

My parents arrived a short while after. My mom ran up to me and kissed me about a thousand times. I let her hug me and I smiled. I had missed this growing up. I was always a rebel and never let my parents near me. Now I realized what I was missing. My dad came after my mom and kissed the top of my head.
"How do you feel, baby girl?" my mom said.
"I'm pretty good. I guess I get out tomorrow." I said smiling.
"How wonderful!" my mom cried. They stayed for about and hour and we just sat and talked. Before they left, Graham got up and came to me and whispered something in my ear.
"I'm gonna go get some food. I'll be back in a little while." he kissed my cheek, waved to my parents and left.

[G.P.girl]

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MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
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MOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

UM.....PLEASE?

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

"I'm gonna go get some food. I'll be back in a little while." he kissed my cheek, waved to my parents and left. My parents stayed a little longer and left so I could rest.
I woke up the next day and Graham was fast asleep on the small pull-out loveseat. I stretched my arms over my head and looked at the clock. It was a little past eight. I turned on the TV. The doctor came in and checked my stats again.
"You look wonderful. We will give you some pills that you have to take twice a day and we will go from there." he said, nodding and smiling at me.
"Thank you, doctor." I said. Graham had awoken by the sound of the door closing.
"Hey, what did he say?" he asked, coming to sit next to me on the bed.
"He said I'd have to take some pills, but otherwise I'm good." I said. "Should we start packing up my stuff?" I asked, stepping out of bed and putting my slippers on.
"Yeah, I'll get your stuff out of the bathroom, you grab your stuff out here." he said. I collected my little personal items from my table and place them neatly in my suitcase. I got dressed in some more presentable pajamas and Graham wheeled me to the elevator. We got into the elevator with another doctor and we soon arrived on the first main floor. Nurses, doctors and paramedics rushed past us with a patient on a bed. I looked and tried to see who it was.

[G.P.girl]

:eek: :eek: who is it??

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

There was a limp figure lying on the bed as it rushed past. The person looked similar, but I couldn't figure out who it was. Then it came to me. I got out of my wheelchair and ran, following the crowd of doctors around the bed until they stopped in a room. I stood on my tiptoes trying to see if my assumption was correct. It was.

[G.P.girl]

:eek: why do you aslways have to stop at the good parts?????

[FurMomx6]

who was it!???! More more!!

[G.P.girl]

yeah! you can't give up on this one just cuz you started a new one!!!

[petlover]

Please just let us know who it was and we won't bother you for the rest of the night. Please? * tear*



It was a friend from the medical center!

I know it! I know it!

Can I be a character in the story?

[G.P.girl]

Yeah i bet it was eliza!:D

[petlover]

I bet it was too!

[FurMomx6]

*bump*

more?? please?

[petlover]

Where are you ILuvMyAbbyGirl?:(

[G.P.girl]

i think she's abandoning this story! more please!:D

[slleipnir]

Um, I've actually read more of the story now, I like your writing, I like the storyline - for the most part..No offence, but some of it doesn't make a lot of sense..like the anorexia part..You make it seem like tons of people die from it..when they don't. It's rare, thankfully, that people die. Unless the girls parents were totally uninvolved and uncaring they would notice before she was at the point she was going to die. They could come close, need hospitalization for weeks to months, but is unlikely they die...

[G.P.girl]

why aren't you writing more?? i wanna know what happens!

[FurMomx6]

*Bump*

what happens next??

[trayi52]

Hey good story, how about writing some more.

Did you write the story on your homepage about Ari? That was very good, I want to read it to my grandchildren, they will love it.

But please do write some more, it is very good. I can see you being published one of these days. Keep it up, and I am not kidding. :)

Quit making us wait so long!! ;) :)

[trayi52]

Oh by the way, this cutting that this young girl was doing, do young people really do this? Why do they do that? I have never heard of that, I have an 18 year old and I have never heard her talk about that.

That is a scary thought, if that is really happening with our young people.

You are a good writer, and to think I have passed this thread up so many times. Now I am like these young ladies, waiting for your next chapter. LOL.:) Go Girl!!!

[Amber]

yes, alot of young girls and boys do cuttings.. Im not really sure why, but i think it might because they are stressed, mad, or depressed. Im not sure but there are people out there who do it.
It's Scary...

[trayi52]

Amber, how long has this kind of thing been going on, I just wonder if it happening where I live. Guess I need to have a talk with my daughter and see if it is happening in her school. I know of some of her friends that gag themselves just so they can loose weight. I know some of these girls personally, and I have always tried to help these girls in someway.

Well I am rambling, I just cannot get that out of my mind that this is something really happening to young people, Oh my god!!!

Thanks for telling me about this Amber.:)

[G.P.girl]

i think kids cut everywhere, but maybe more in someplaces more than others. like in schools where it's condidered "cool". alot of kids do it just because thats what all the 'cool' kids do and they want to fit in.:rolleyes:



p.s. waiting to hear more story!!!

[Amber]

Your Welcome, Im not so sure when it happened, but it happens everywhere.

[trayi52]

Thanks for the info, I talked with my daughter Lin about it, she said yeah she had heard of it too, that the ones that done it at her school done for the rush. Wow!! Now I have heard everything. Well.

You guys get Megan( is that her name?0 to get back on here and post "the rest of the story". I am wondering about it myself.

Do something, make her!!!!:) ;)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Originally posted by trayi52
Hey good story, how about writing some more.

Did you write the story on your homepage about Ari? That was very good, I want to read it to my grandchildren, they will love it.

But please do write some more, it is very good. I can see you being published one of these days. Keep it up, and I am not kidding. :)

Quit making us wait so long!! ;) :)

As for my Ari story, yes, it is on my band geeks page. I think.. if not I can email it to you.

GOOD NEWS!

My story is up and running again. Not to steal Cayter's spotlight, because her's is FABULOUS, but I need to write SOMETHING.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

If you don't remember [I didn't :o] Here's where we left off-

There was a limp figure lying on the bed as it rushed past. The person looked similar, but I couldn't figure out who it was. Then it came to me. I got out of my wheelchair and ran, following the crowd of doctors around the bed until they stopped in a room. I stood on my tiptoes trying to see if my assumption was correct. It was.

[petlover]

I was going to PM you about when you were going to finnish the story. I was trying to find it so that I could post in it.

So... Who was it!?!?!?:)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Here it is! The long awaited post of who she saw!... *drum roll please*
...The limp body lying on the table resembled a girl… she had long beautiful flowing hair. I looked through the small window on the door. The person on the table was still semi-concious, but hardly moving. She looked scared and she kept looking back and forth between the doctors surrounding her.
I looked closely at her terrified face. It was Olivia’s mom. My second mom. I burst through the doors of the ER room and ran to her bedside.
“What happened? What happened?!?!” I screamed to the doctors around me.
“Car accident ma’am. Please, you need to leave. You can’t be here.” A lady nurse told me.
“No no, I know her. Please, I need to be with her.” I said, trying to break loose of the nurses grasp on my arms.
“Ma’am, now.” She said, and pushed me out the door. It was no use.
“Graham, GRAHAM!” I yelled. He had finished signing the papers at the desk and was looking for me.
“Kersey, come on, where were you?” he asked. He grabbed my jacket off the chair but before he could put it on me, I pushed away.
“Graham, no! Listen to me!” I cried. He looked at me like I had just slapped him. We had never argued as far as I could remember and I had just yelled at him.
“Graham, I’m sorry. But please. Olivia’s mom just came in, she was in a car accident.” I said. Graham took a breath and grabbed my jacket again.
“Kers, there’s nothing we can do right now. Let’s go home and we can come back later and check on her.” He said. He held out my jacket and I reluctantly put it on. I sat back down in the wheel chair and started wringing my hands. My feet were taping on the foot rests of the wheel chair, my fingers tapping on the arm rests.
“Kersey, it will be okay.” Graham said once we got to the car. He tossed my stuff into the back of the car and helped me into the front seat. “Besides, I want to show you what I did with the apartment.” He said, smiling.

[petlover]

More please!!:D It is good so far!
I want to know what he did to the apartment.:)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I looked at him with a puzzled expression. What had he done?
We got home and he opened the car door for me and held out his hand.
“Why thank you!” I said, smiling. He led me inside but told me to cover my eyes.
“Almost there…” he said as we walked up the front steps. “Ok, open!” he said. I slowly opened my eyes, afraid of what I would see

[apcrs5122]

I just finished reading this just now!:o ;)


MEGAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!! RIGHT NOW MISSY!:p ;) :D

[G.P.girl]

:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: you always stop at the exciting parts! WHY?

[ticosmyham]

Originally posted by G.P.girl
:rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: you always stop at the exciting parts! WHY?

yes megan.....WHY??!! :) lol

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“Why thank you!” I said, smiling. He led me inside but told me to cover my eyes.
“Almost there…” he said as we walked up the front steps. “Ok, open!” he said. I slowly opened my eyes, afraid of what I would see.
“Surprise!!” people yelled. Graham had brought everyone together as a welcome home party and I noticed he also had all the boxes unpacked from our move. The apartment was beautiful. He had repainted some of the rooms, and painted the living room red, my favorite color.
“One more thing.” He said and went off to another room. One by one people came up to talk to me. First was my parents.
“Oh welcome home, baby!” they both screamed, showering me with hugs and kisses. I hugged them back and then they backed off to let other people through.
“How are you feeling?” someone yelled from the back of the crowd. I had no idea who it was.
“I’m great, thanks. But excuse me, I have a call I need to make.” I said and cut through the crowd to the kitchen.
Once inside the safety of the kitchen, I began dialing the hospital’s telephone number. The secretary picked up.
“Hello, hospital, how can I help you?” she asked.
“I was wondering how Patricia Ross was doing.” I asked, tapping my fingernails on the counter.
“Please hold.” The secretary said, and I heard elevator music. I rolled my eyes and waited. The anxiety was killing me.
I looked around the freshly painted kitchen, with all of our old appliances. My eyes drifted over to the butcher block containing all the knives. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. I reopened them and stared at the knives again. Just once, I thought. No one will ever know. Just this once. There was an overpowering voice inside my head demanding me to do it. I put the phone down quietly, and moved towards the opposite counter. I was in a sort of trance, not realizing what I was doing until someone said my name.

[apcrs5122]

Oooooh!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“Kers?” the voice asked. My eyes remained focused on the knives. “Kersey, damnit, what are you doing?” the voice yelled. It was Graham. I turned my head towards him.
“Kersey. You have a knife in your hand. What the hell do you think you are doing?” he asked, actually yelling at me. “Put it down. Now.” He demanded. The force inside me wouldn’t let go of the knife. My chin was trembling because Graham was so angry. Finally I got to my senses and dropped it.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“Kersey, I thought you were over this. What were you doing?” he slammed the off the hook phone back onto the receiver. “Please tell me you weren’t going to cut yourself. Please.” He said. I turned to face him again.
“I… I don’t know Graham. The whole thing with Olivia’s mom… I… I’m so confused.” I said. I put my elbows on the counter and rubbed my eyes. “I’m sorry, it won’t happen again.” I said, sincerely.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“Promise? Kersey, even though I did it too, it still scares me seeing you do it, the one I love. You’re what I live for and to see you do it, it makes me hurt. I’ve stopped, and you need to too.” He said. He came over to me and took my hands in his. “Now, that present is waiting.” He said, leading me out of the kitchen.

[apcrs5122]

What's the present?!?!?!?! MOREEEEEEE!!!!!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

We went out into the living room where everyone was sitting.
“I’ll be right back guys.” Graham said to everyone and then he told me to sit on the floor and wait for a second. I sat down and tried to think of what he could have gotten me.
“Close your eyes!” he yelled from the other room. I looked around at the other people around me and slowly closed my eyes. I heard footsteps coming back from the hall, indicating Graham was coming back. The steps stopped in front of me, then I felt something on my face.

[apcrs5122]

A DOGGY!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!;) :D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“Gr..Graham? What the…” I said, reaching my hands up to touch whatever was in my face. I heard the people laughing at me from behind.
“Haha.” I said sarcastically to them. I opened my eyes. I saw the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. It was small, and maybe even smaller than the palm of your hand. I gasped.
Graham was holding a small puppy. It was a teacup Pomeranian, I had had one when I was little.
“Thank your parents, not me.” He said, smiling. He knew just what to do to make me happy. “Her name’s Izzy. Isabella, but Izzy for short. She’s from the lady down the street. What’s her name.. Dayna. She’s a great person. She’s already given Iz all her shots and she is going to pay for her spaying because it was a puppy from her litter.” Graham got up from the kneeling position on the ground and put Izzy down on the floor. She had a huge red ribbon tied around her neck.
“We had a little trouble with the bow, but we compromised.” Graham said, laughing.
“Graham! She is so cute! Thank you guys!” I said. I now knew this dog had the answers to everything. She kept me going.
“Let’s eat!” Graham said to everyone, and they began filing towards the kitchen and dining room.
“Like her?” Graham asked after everyone had gone to the kitchen.
“Like her? LIKE HER? Graham, I love this dog!” I said, getting up and hugging him. “Thank you so much.” I said.

[apcrs5122]

YAY!!!!! A puppy!!!:D And I was in the story too:p :)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I tucked Izzy under my arm and we went into the kitchen together. Then the phone rang.
“I’ll get it.” I said, and grabbed the phone.
“Hello?” I asked.
“Is this Kersey?” the person asked.
“Speaking.” I replied, wondering who it could be.
“This is the nurse at the hospital. You called about 15 minutes ago and we lost our connection.”
“Yes, yes, we had… family trouble.” I said. It was kind of the truth.
“The information on Mrs. Ross is here. She is in a coma and has some pretty bad cuts. She won’t be as pretty as she was a few days ago. She is in critical condition, but she is stable, and on her way to what we hope is a fast and easy recovery.” She said. “Thank you for calling,” and hung up.

[Dogz]

I know, I know, I haven't been reading it.:o

I finally caught up though! I can't believe he got her a puppy! What a perfect character to add to the story. I hope Mrs. Ross gets better.

More please!:)

[G.P.girl]

Awww cute puppy! more!!!!!:D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I put the phone down. The information was enough to keep me satisfied for a while.
Throughout the night, Izzy was tucked safely under my arm. Everyone left at their own pace, and by ten, everyone was gone.
“Did you have fun?” Graham asked.
“Definitely. Thank you very much.” I said, smiling.
“About the knife incident, Kersey, what got into you?” he asked, sitting on the couch. I didn’t say anything, only pet Izzy’s brown ears.
“Talk to me.” He pleaded. “I just want to help.”
“I don’t know! There’s just so much going on with Olivia’s mom. I’m scared, confused, I just don’t know anymore.” I said, sitting next to him. I rested my head on his arm.
“Well cutting solves nothing. After all my years of doing it, I finally realized it wasn’t worth it.” He said, rubbing my shoulder.
“Maybe I need it Graham. It was my security blanket all those years back at home.”
“Need it? You still want to cut?” he asked, obviously shocked.
“It’s possible.” I said.
“You can’t. I won’t let you.” He said, getting up. He stood over me; I had fallen back onto the couch once he had gotten up. Izzy was prancing around on my chest.
“Graham, you don’t understand.” I replied getting up. Izzy jumped off the couch and followed me into the bedroom. No one understood. But that’s where Izzy came in.

[Dogz]

I love when pets are in the stories.:D More please.

[G.P.girl]

more please:D
i know thats all we can seem to say, but thas really all we want...moremoremoremoremoremoremoemore:D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I sat down on the bed and closed my eyes. Graham didn’t understand that it was hard for me to quit. Yes, I hadn’t done it in… months probably. But that didn’t come with ideas of cutting, cravings, the whole works. Izzy was bouncing around on the floor trying to get onto the bed.
“Come on, Iz. Show the world height doesn’t matter.” I said, laughing. I swept her off the floor and put her on the bed beside me.
“So Izzy. Do you at least understand where I’m coming from with this?” I asked. She was too busy attacking lumps in the bedspread. I smiled.
“Well, we can pretend you do.” I said. I looked at my wrists. My wrists were normal color, but the scars were definitely there. I looked around the room. Searching for my weapon.

[G.P.girl]

NOOO bad kersey! bad bad bad!!!!

[apcrs5122]

More puhleeeez!!!;) :D

Oh and did you know that the two main characters, Kersey and Ghram, are names of two Pet Talk doggies?;) :p :D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Originally posted by apcrs5122

Oh and did you know that the two main characters, Kersey and Ghram, are names of two Pet Talk doggies?;) :p :D

I think that's how Graham came to me, I was always in love with him and the pic they submitted for a contest of him laughing... if anyone can find it bump it back up. Kersey, not sure how I thought of that. They are from the same family though, right? [Forgive me if I am wrong. :o]

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid33/p3033324800c1c5a9ad6243461ce2c41c/fd3fb229.jpg

There's Graham :D:D:D

[Dogz]

I want to marry Graham, he is adorable!;) :p

Yup, Kersey & Graham come from the same family, I noticed that a while ago.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Originally posted by Dogz
I want to marry Graham, he is adorable!;) :p


Which Graham??? The dog or the character?? LOL

[G.P.girl]

YES....I WOULDNT MIND MARRYING GRAHAM EITHER....:D Oops sorry about the caps...i'm too lazy to go back and retype it all....but you're getting off the subject! she was searching for a weapon.......and then.......---------(feel free to fill in the blanks now):p

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I knew Graham kept a pocket knife in one of his jackets. I looked in the closet, through all of his pockets. I found nothing. I decided to sneak off to the bathroom to see what I could find there.
I opened the bedroom door and heard the television. I tiptoed around the corner and into the small but tidy bathroom. I rummaged through the drawers knowing there were some razors around somewhere. Izzy was sniffing around the room, attacking the strings at the end of the carpet.
“I’m glad at least you’re happy. Iz.” I said, continuing to look through the drawers.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Finally I found a razor. I slipped it off of the plastic handle and looked at it. This was like a diamond to a rich girl. I put the toilet cover down and sat down. My hands were shaking with excitement. I hadn’t done it for so long, would I still feel the way I used to? I looked down for Izzy. She was still playing with the rug.
I picked up the razor again and looked at it. I placed my wrist on the cool porcelain of the sink. My hands started to sweat and the razor fell out of my hand. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath and picked it up again. A little voice in my head assured me I could do this.
I regripped the small razor in my hand. I placed it on my wrist carefully. Then Izzy barked. My heart started pounding. Had she heard Graham coming or something?

[G.P.girl]

Good izzy!!!don't let her do it! good doggie!:D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Gosh, I was wondering where you guys went.... I was so alone! Here's more:

I took a glance over at her. She was just looking at me; like she was telling me whatever I was doing was bad. I closed my eyes.
“Izzy please. I can’t play right now.” I said. I turned back to my wrists. I pressed the razor harder on my skin. Izzy barked again, and I jumped, gashing my arm harder and deeper than I had expected.
“Izzy! Damnit!” I yelled, and then covered my mouth.
“Kersey? Everything okay?” Graham asked from outside the door.
“Yes, she just… uh… nipped at my toes. It’s okay.” I said, rushing around the bathroom, grabbing some toilet paper to cover my cut. Izzy walked over to the bathroom door and sat down. She wouldn’t even look at me.
I started to pace around the bathroom. I was thinking about what Graham would say when he found out. I started feeling lightheaded. I smiled. Just the effect I was waiting for.
I put my hand on the sink but it slipped out from underneath me. I fell, grabbing the shower curtain on my way down. Izzy jumped, and started to bark. I remember falling into the bathtub, but I think I hit my head.

[G.P.girl]

poor izzy:( :( :( go help her graham!!!!! bad kersey!!!!!:D more pleeez

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I woke up in the bedroom underneath the covers. I opened my eyes and took the towel off my head. I had a massive headache. I closed my eyes again and when I opened them, Graham was sitting on the end of the bed. I pulled my hand out from under the covers and looked at my wrist. It was wrapped in an ace bandage.
Graham was just sitting on the end of the bed, staring off into space. I slipped my hand back under the covers. Graham heard to sheets rustle. He looked at me, but didn’t say anything. He just shook his head and got up. He went over to the window and put his hands on the ledge.
“What happened?” I asked. I was pretty sure I knew what happened. I was dizzy enough that I fell and must have knocked myself out.
“What happened?? Kersey, you cut yourself. And it wasn’t an accident. You cut yourself, blood was everywhere, even the blood from your head. You fell into the bathtub. That’s how you cut your head. You promised me you wouldn’t do this again Kersey.” He said. Now it was my turn to be silent. I said nothing. I touched my head. I hadn’t even realized I had cut my head.
“I’m sorry.” I said without even realizing it. “It’s a bad habit you can’t break. You know, you went through it too, Graham. Bear with me. I’m trying.” I said, tears welling up in the back of my eyes.
“I know Kersey. I’m sorry, but you can’t do shit like that anymore. You scared me to death. I heard you fall and when I saw you covered in blood in the bathroom, that’s not something you see and pass over. I was worried.” He yelled.

[G.P.girl]

hmmm...maybe sh eshould go back to the center and see Dr. Shannon:D

[Dogz]

I wonder what is going to happen next.. more please!

[apcrs5122]

Bad Kersey!!!! Moremore Megan!:D Please?;)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

He grabbed his car keys off the dresser beside me.
“I just need to… to think.” He said, and left.
“Graham, what?!” I cried out. My head shot with pain and I quickly layed back down. He was leaving me. He really was. I started to cry. The tears burned my cheeks, and my head pounded. What would I do without him?

[apcrs5122]

I was wondering if he was gonna do that!!!! COME BACK GRAHAM!!!!!!!!!!!

[G.P.girl]

i would leave if i were graham too. but he has to take care of her!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I must have cried myself to sleep, because Izzy woke me up needing to go outside. I tossed the blanket aside, trying to recall what had happened. I sat there for a minute on the edge of the bed trying to think. All I could remember was that Graham was gone. I rubbed my red puffy eyes and continued to the door to let Izzy out.
Izzy and I walked to the kitchen together. I made myself a cup of coffee and proceeded to the door.
Izzy ran out and I sat on the steps. I thought about what would happen if Graham came back. I guess you could call this our first official fight. I knew what needed to happen.

[G.P.girl]

what needs to happen????

[Tweety_Pie]

MORE MORE MORE!!!

[apcrs5122]

MORE!!!! Pleeeeez?!;) :D

[G.P.girl]

MORE!!!!! pleez :D :p

[petlover]

Sheez!!! PLEASE tell us. What needs to happen?:)




moremoremoremoremoremoremoremore:D :rolleyes:

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Izzy ran out and I sat on the steps. I thought about what would happen if Graham came back. I guess you could call this our first official fight. I knew what needed to happen.
I took the wrapping off my wrist. It was swollen and purple, just like every other cut. I carefully massaged it, trying to make it less purple. I had to stop myself from doing this. If it was tearing Graham and I apart, I needed to stop.
“Come on Izzy, let’s go.” I called out to the darkness. Nothing.
“Izzy, I’m not doing this, let’s go in.” I said. Still nothing. I stepped off the porch onto the cool dewey grass. I called her name again, still nothing. I walked around the yard, barefoot, searching for Izzy. I searched all around the house but found nothing. I started to cry again, realizing I had just lost the two things that actually mattered to me in life. Graham and Izzy.

[G.P.girl]

Wheres izzy??*sob*

[trayi52]

Come on! Don't leave us hanging like this, for gods sake! We need more, I have no more nails to chew off. Grovers nails are starting to look good to me!!!;)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I ran back into the house in tears. But then I stopped. I needed to get back under control. I took a deep breath and went over my options. I could call Graham’s parents and see if he was there, I could call my parents, but what would they do? I sat on the couch and put my head in my hands. I had been too involved in my own problems to worry about my own dog.
I went into the kitchen to get another cup of coffee. I sat at the kitchen table and started tapping my fingers on the table. Then I heard a weird noise. It scared me so I got up slowly. I tiptoed out of the kitchen and into the hallway. The noise was coming from my bedroom and it sounded Iike someone trying to get in the house. I was afraid; my hands were shaking and I was sweating. I peered into my room and gasped.

[petlover]

What was it??:eek:

[G.P.girl]

:eek: :eek: :eek: why????????????????????????????????you always stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! whyyyyyyyyyyyyy??????:eek: :eek: :eek:

[G.P.girl]

why arent you writing? now i'm sad:(

[apcrs5122]

Moooore Meegan!:p :D

[green_chameleon_girl]

OH MORE!! Im back for the story it took so long to read but now Im back for sure:D Keep Going:D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Since everything got erased when they fixed my computer, I'll have to sneak on to my mom's computer and email the story back over here. More coming soon, I promise!

[G.P.girl]

i'd been wondering why you weren't writing;) hurry up!

[trayi52]

What was wrong with your computer??? Well hurry up and get to writing some more. We a impatient bunch here!!;)

Willie

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Voila!! Have you been waiting??

I went into the kitchen to get another cup of coffee. I sat at the kitchen table and
started tapping my fingers on the table. Then I heard a weird noise. It scared me so I
got up slowly. I tiptoed out of the kitchen and into the hallway. The noise was coming
from my bedroom and it sounded Iike someone trying to get in the house. I was
afraid; my hands were shaking and I was sweating. I peered into my room and
gasped.
There she was; perfectly fine, happy and cheerful, pulling on a sock that was
sticking out of my closet. It was stuck in a way that when she pulled on it, it pulled the
door forward, making a banging noise. She must have snuck in when I was going
over all my problems.
I just shook my head and sat on the bed. I was feeling lightheaded from both
cuts.
“You scared me to death, Iz. You little brat!” I joked with her. She stopped
chewing, looked up at me and cocked her head. You just had to laugh at her.

[G.P.girl]

Bad izzy for scaring kersey! bad kersey for not finding Graham!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“You scared me to death, Iz. You little brat!” I joked with her. She stopped chewing,
looked up at me and cocked her head. You just had to laugh at her.
I pulled her up on the bed with me and turned out the light. She crawled under
the blanket with me and we went to sleep.
I woke up the next morning and found a note on the bedside table. It was from
Graham. I opened it and read it outloud.
“I came home earlier and you were sleeping. I had to think a lot of things over.
I thought about you and I, and how we used to be.” I stopped reading. Used to be?
This wasn’t sounding good. I read on.
“I remember when we first met, when you ignored me at first. Then we got
together, and we were what everyone talked about for weeks. All this stuff was
running through my mind as I drove. I thought about the day I proposed to you, the
day you came home from the hospital.” I turned the page over.

[trayi52]

Hey, I'm old and getting older by the minute. WRITE MORE!!!

Willie;)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“I love you and always will. I guess I’ve just been overwhelmed by the incidents we’ve
had with cutting. I’ve stopped and you need to too. I don’t want you hurt more than
you are. Please. I’m staying at my parents for a while. Please call me soon. Love,
Graham.”
I put the note down. He had read my mind. I was stopping. I had stopped
cutting yesterday the moment I fell.

[Tweety_Pie]

MORE MORE!:p

[CamCamPup33]

AH! I thought this story ended! :( Im missing so much! I dont remember where i end up! :( ;)

[apcrs5122]

Oooh it's good!:D

[G.P.girl]

so she stopped cutting? good! no more dr. shannon then:) :(

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Is anyone up for another update? Everyone elses stories are better than mine! LOL... I'm yesterday's trash... I'll update if I haven't lost too many fans....

[trayi52]

We're here waiting.......I love your story. Please continue.:)

[G.P.girl]

I"M STILL HERE!!!!i'm your #1 fan!!!

[apcrs5122]

I want more story!:D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

*has some..*

*wonders if anyone wants more... lol*

[apcrs5122]

STOP TOURTURING US LIKE THIS!!!!!;) :p

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

*Finally* I post something! Sorry... having... issues.

Anyway, here!



I put the note down. He had read my mind. I was stopping. I had stopped
cutting yesterday the moment I fell.
I called him right away.
“Graham?” I asked quietly.
“Oh. Hi Kersey.” he said just as quiet.
“How are you? I’ve missed you.”
“I’ve been okay. Worried about you, but I’m okay. How are you? Your head?”
he asked.
“Fine, but a little sore.” Finally I got up the courage and told him how I felt.
“Graham, I really miss you. I need you here with me. I have stopped cutting. I
promise. I swear this time, I know I blew my last chance, but I promise. I miss you. I
need you here with me.” I said. I swallowed hard. This was not the time for crying.
Graham didn’t say anything for a few seconds.
“Well, I’m proud, Kersey. Do you still love me?” he asked, jokingly.
“Forever and always.” I said. And I really meant it.
Graham and I continued talking for a while about what all had happened in
the twenty-four hours he’d been gone. He told me when we hung up that he was
coming back home. I sat back on my bed and took a deep breath. I was happy he
was coming home.
I went and looked at my wedding dress in the closet. We had some plans for
what was happening; we would get married at the church where his parents were
married and have the reception at the local ballroom a few miles away.
Graham finally got home about an hour later. I ran up and hugged and kissed
him at the door. He took his hands in mine and he looked at me. He just had this
look in his eyes; I couldn’t really describe it, it was just this look that I knew things
would be okay from now on.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

The days passed and our love only grew stronger. I think the “fight” was good
for us, it gave us a sense of what we meant to each other. Needless to say, we
we’re like the “old Kersey and Graham”.
The days dwindled down to our wedding. It was almost 3 weeks until the big
day. But I had this really weird feeling that I needed to check something. There was
a huge knot growing in my stomach because of it.

[G.P.girl]

AWWWWWW--how sweet!

[petlover]

Check what?:) I need to know. Bad. You know when I just read that little part. " Our love only grew stronger" I could feel wind and the smell of fall wrap around me, I could also feel leaves falling in my hair. The smell of Fall had gave birth again! I loved it.:) more;) :)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Originally posted by petlover
Check what?:) I need to know. Bad. You know when I just read that little part. " Our love only grew stronger" I could feel wind and the smell of fall wrap around me, I could also feel leaves falling in my hair. The smell of Fall had gave birth again! I loved it.:) more;) :)

Wow... funny you say that, Jan... That's scary... fall had given birth... read on my friend.

The days passed and our love only grew stronger. I think the “fight” was good
for us, it gave us a sense of what we meant to each other. Needless to say, we
we’re like the “old Kersey and Graham”.
The days dwindled down to our wedding. It was almost 3 weeks until the big
day. But I had this really weird feeling that I needed to check something. There was
a huge knot growing in my stomach because of it.
The next day I came up to Graham while he was at the kitchen table. My
hands were shaking, my forehead sweating. I didn’t know if he would be ready to
hear what I said. I sat down at the table across from him. I folded my hands and took
a deep breath. I opened my eyes again and looked over at him. He was staring at
me.
“What is the matter with you?” he asked me.
“I-I... I...” I stuttered. I closed my eyes again and regained my composure.
“Graham... we... I...” I stuttered again. I felt a lump in my throat.
“Kersey, please, what’s wrong?” he asked again, reaching across the table
and holding my hands in his.
I pulled something out from pocket of my jeans. It was a small box, about the
size of a necklace box or something. I slowly placed it on the table; my hand still
shaking, making the box make a rattling noise on the table. Graham didn’t reach for
it right away.
“What is this?” he asked, finally picking it up. I opened my mouth and tried to
say something, but nothing came out. He released my other hand to open the box. I
put my hands to my face and closed my eyes. I swallowed hard, debating whether I
was happy, scared, sad, afraid, whatever.
I peered through my fingers to see his emotions and reactions. He opened
the box and looked inside. Then he set the box down.
“This... what?” he asked, puzzled.
“Baby. That means I’m having a baby, Graham.” I managed to say. I looked at
him again. He had this mixed expression; happiness and disbelief.

[G.P.girl]

:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Originally posted by ILoveMyAbbyGirl
“Baby. That means I’m having a baby, Graham.”

That means BABY. [lol]

But :eek:!

[petlover]

I knew she was going to have a baby sometime in this story!!! I knew it. But still.....




:eek: :eek: :eek: :eek: :eek:

[Tweety_Pie]

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

So, boy or girl?

[trayi52]

A sweet beautiful little girl!!! Or boy......

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Originally posted by trayi52
A sweet beautiful little girl!!! Or boy......


*wonders what Willie wants... lol*

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“Baby. That means I’m having a baby, Graham.” I managed to say. I looked at him
again. He had this mixed expression; happiness and disbelief. He sat there for a
few minutes and just stared at the box. Finally he looked up at me with a smile on his
face.
“Baby.” he said, still smiling. “Wow.” he whispered. I smiled back at him with
that same smile he gave me a few nights ago; the smile that told him it was okay.
We decided to make the announcement at our wedding reception. I needed
to go to the rehab center to tell everyone. Graham and I went the next day.

[trayi52]

I would like for it to be healthy, have to say I have a soft spot in my heart for little girls. Another thing, I hope her pregnancy don't take 9 months, the suspense is killing me!!!;)

Willie:)

[Tweety_Pie]

it has to be a girl!!!:D :p call it Kelsey!!! MUHAAHAHA! lol!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Ohhhh, another point.... who gets to name the baby?? What will it be named? I think I should gather some ideas from you guys and hold a poll... :D

[Kfamr]

I haven't read the whole thing yet, Megan, but it's great to the point i've read so far.

[trayi52]

Name it Megan....I think that is a pretty name. Case closed. LOL! Now on with the story.....

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

LOL... I don't like my name... I am open to suggestions... but if you DO suggest-- please give me a boy and girl name. You never know!

[trayi52]

What the heck is wrong with Megan, you can let them be twins. Megan and Morgan!

Willie;)

[Tweety_Pie]

**COUGH**MAKE THE BABY A GIRL**COUGH**AN CALL IT KELSEY**COUGH***!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:p ;) :) :D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

We walked in and right away noticed a total difference in the place. First off, I
didn’t see Shannon, Julie, or anyone I knew. There were plain old nurses in white
jackets. I looked at Graham.
“Excuse me, can I please see Eliza Brown?” I asked.
“Room 124.” the white-coated nurse replied in a monotone voice. Graham
and I showed ourselves the way.
“Everything is so... white.” he said, looking around. He had my hand wrapped
in his the whole walk to Eliza’s room. The walls had been painted white over their
original color of pale blue.
“I don’t like it at all. I wonder what happened to everyone.” I asked, confused. I
knocked on Eliza’s door.

[Tweety_Pie]

more more! pssssst Megan check your pms!:p

[trayi52]

Please continue, afterall I get to be its great grandmother?

[Tweety_Pie]

yes MORE MORE MORE! you have us on the ends of our seats **ouch I just fell off** :p

[apcrs5122]

Megan, you are a bad bad girl!;) lol I'm joking, you know it:p haha


More story! I love it, and I need more now!:D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“I don’t like it at all. I wonder what happened to everyone.” I asked, confused. I
knocked on Eliza’s door.
“Who is it?” she yelled from inside. I opened the door.
“Kersey!!” she screamed-literally screamed-in my ear. “Oh my gosh! I’m so
glad to see you!” she cried.
“Hey kiddo!” I said hugging her.
“Where have you two been?” she said winking.
“Haha... well... I have a surprise for you.” I said, wringing my hands. Why was I
so nervous? Eliza smiled.
“What?” she asked, hopping up and down. She was like a little sister waiting
for candy.
“Graham and I... we’re... having a baby.” I said, quietly, looking at my feet.
Eliza’s mouth dropped.
“Baby?” she asked. She dropped her mouth open even further.
“Yeah. Baby.” I said. She hugged us both once more and told us to sit on her
bed.
“So what happened to this place?” Graham asked.
“We don’t know... we think it was because they weren’t bringing in enough
money. They got new owners... it’s been really weird lately.” she said.
“Yeah... too much white.” Graham said, laughing. We talked on and on for
almost 3 hours when the nurses knocked on the door.
“Excuse me children, visiting hours are over.” she said, and closed the door
again.
“Visiting hours?” I cried. “That’s the dumbest thing I’ve ever heard.” I
exclaimed. Eliza nodded. She got up and hugged Graham and I again and she
kissed my belly.
“Come back soon. Please.” she pleaded.
“I’ll be back very soon. Do you think they will let you come to the wedding?” I
asked.
“How much longer?” Eliza asked.
“Three weeks from tomorrow.”
“I’ll... be out by then!” she stated, smiling.
“Aww! That’s great Eliza!” I said, smiling for her. Then the nurse knocked
again.
“Now please.” she said and waited for us to leave.
“See you later, Eliza.” Graham and I said in unison. We waved and left.

[Tweety_Pie]

MORE MORE!

[G.P.girl]

name the girl baby Audrey!!!!or if it's a boy name it Dylan! i loooove those names!

[apcrs5122]

I love the name Chase lol And Chanel or Camile (hey, they're all C's:rolleyes: :p) I love others too.......

More! It's good:)

[green_chameleon_girl]

Call the baby SNAKE!!;)

[Tweety_Pie]

MORE MORE MORE.. MORE MOR MORE!!

*cough*call the baby Kelsey*cough*

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

LOL... What would I do without you guys?

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

HAS ANYONE REALIZED?

Look-- this is out of the first coulple paragraphs of the story.
It was my first day back. All eyes were on me. I mean all eyes. I had been gone for
about three weeks, and they had all noticed. I walked to homeroom with my head
down, not wanting to be seen. I knew I had marks on my face, and they all just HAD
to know.
"Kersey? Hey! Welcome back!" said the cheery, Pippy-Longstocking voice
of Eliza, a girl I used to be friends with.
"Yes, Eliza, I'm back." I said sarcastically, really wishing she would leave me
alone for once. I looked up at her. She was so beautiful. A small petite frame of
about 105 pounds, she was so pretty. My 125-pound body looked like one huge ball
of fat.


I just realized I have two Eliza's! And they aren't the same person! *D'oh*

[green_chameleon_girl]

Make one a Lizz or Elizabeth or Elly

[Tweety_Pie]

LOL! I NEVER NOTICED! HAHAHAHHA!

[G.P.girl]

nope! i didn't realize!:D name the baby rex!!!!

[Tweety_Pie]

HAHAHAHAHAHA SHANNON!

[green_chameleon_girl]

HAHAHAHHA you crack me up:D:D:D:D:D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Rex... lmao YOU guys crack me up!

[green_chameleon_girl]

Hi this is my baby his name is Snake we call him Rex for short HAHA

[G.P.girl]

it's a great name!!!good for boys, girls, dgos cats chamelions....it's a universal name!!!!!:D

[trayi52]

As I told you, I am getting grayer by the minute. I would like to live long enough to read the rest of the story.

Do you know how interesting this story is to me???

I would like to hear more PLEASE!!!!!;)

[green_chameleon_girl]

Christmas is comming you know;)

[G.P.girl]

IT SURE IS!!!
more story please!!!:D

[Tweety_Pie]

more story! baaahh! MORE!:D :p ;)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

FOR WILLIE!!! (my pal, sorry I made you wait!)

“See you later, Eliza.” Graham and I said in unison. We waved and left.
The wedding was drawing nearer. It was now a week and a half until the
wedding. Eliza had called the day before, telling us she was home, still living with
her parents, but home. We were both very excited for her.
Graham had already started planning for the baby. He was figuring finances
and even pointing out baby stuff we would need in stores.
It was the day of the wedding. I had never been more nervous in my life. I also
think part of me was nervous about telling everyone about the baby. I was getting my
hair done with Eliza, who I wanted to be my bride’s maid. Eliza also suggested I
have a floral arrangement in honor of Olivia. It brought me to tears. There was
definately going to me a memorial.

[Tweety_Pie]

MORE MORE!!


ppsssst *never thought of this* Kersey should name her baby after Olivia? Just a thought :p

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Kelsey!!!!!! GOOD IDEA!! lol we'll wait and see what the poll comes out to be lol

[Tweety_Pie]

Originally posted by ILoveMyAbbyGirl
Kelsey!!!!!! GOOD IDEA!! lol we'll wait and see what the poll comes out to be lol

LOL! **don't forget about a middle name** you could always use Olivia or the other name as a middle name**

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

*bows down in front of Kelsey*

YOU'RE A FRIGGIN GENIOUS KELS!

[Tweety_Pie]

LOL IM A GENIUS! MUAHHAHHAHA

[trayi52]

Kelsey also became a big old blabbermouth tonight!!!!

I think Olivia would be a good name for the baby if its a girl! I like that name too.

Okay get on with the story!!

Willie

[Tweety_Pie]

MORE STORY PLLLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!

[G.P.girl]

NAME IT REX!!!!!!!!!!

[cloverfdx]

Well it has just taken me 2 hours to read from beginning to end and my neck is killing me :)

Megan well done you are a very talented writer and i will be waiting in suspense for the next installment.

*Bravo Bravo* ;)


(Ouch my neck just cracked) Blasted addictive PT and stories J/K

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Originally posted by cloverfdx
Well it has just taken me 2 hours to read from beginning to end and my neck is killing me :)

Megan well done you are a very talented writer and i will be waiting in suspense for the next installment.

*Bravo Bravo* ;)


(Ouch my neck just cracked) Blasted addictive PT and stories J/K

Thank you! Us wackos *ahem...* kind caring people over here at the story thread always like more fans!

[trayi52]

Hey is this going to take nine months? I want my great grandbaby or grandbaby!!!Ump!

Willie;)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Oh your grandbaby's on the way Willie! Hold your horses! Here's more:

Eliza called and ordered a floral arragement for the memorial. She wouldn’t tell me
what type of flowers were in it, but I did hear roses.
Finally came the time to slip into my dress. My hair was gorgeous, and I had
a special diamond tiara that my mother bought me especially for the day I would get
married.
I stepped into the dress with the help of my mother. She zipped up the back
and fluffed the bottom. I turned around and face the mirrors. The memories came
flashing back of when I had first seen this dress, then the day Graham gave it to me.
“You look so beautiful, sweetie.” my mom said, putting her hand over her
mouth. She was crying. I hugged her.
“It’s okay mom, don’t cry.” I said in a calm and caring voice. She backed off
and looked at me again.
“My little girl is getting married.” she said and a smile appeared on her face.
For the first time I was someone’s special little girl. I smiled back and we headed to
the limo. Now we were off to the church.

[Sorry is all chopped up like that... I'll see if I can fix it..]

[trayi52]

Woohoo, I am going to have a grandbaby!!!!!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Notice I listed you guys on the "People you admire most" thread? :)

[trayi52]

Awwww! My baby!!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Oh yes... noticed how I listed you first... lol...

But really, this story wouldn't be anything without you guys. If I wasn't getting pushed to write this, I'd have nothing. You guys push me to do more, do better, and you make me want to write. Thanks guys, it's really a blessing to have so many people enjoying my writing.

:)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

*all goes silent*

I really really meant what I said...

[trayi52]

My grandbaby is Megan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Me? So the new baby is the great grand-baby?

[trayi52]

Shucks, I'll be its great grandpa!!

[Dogz]

I like the name Ellie.

*cough* ELLIE *cough*

No, I haven't left, I just don't post after every update.:)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I watched the scenery roll by through the window in the limo. I remembered being a
little girl over at Olivia’s; playing house and dress up and endless summer sleep
overs. I remembered our first year at junior high school. We were terrified, and we
had no classes together. Somehow we both got through it alive. Then came high
school. Even more scary. We were constantly together on our off time.
We were coming up on her house now. I saw something on her front porch.
first the porch swing that we sat on every night. Then I saw a person... we came
closer and I realized it was a person in a wheel chair, Olivia’s mom.
“Stop the car!” I cried, flinging the door open. I picked up the ends of my
dress and ran up the tattered, worn, wooden porch steps we had played tag on so
many times. This was the home free zone.
Olivia’s mom looked up and me. I stopped on the porch in front of her and
smiled. She looked me over, up and down, looking at my dress.
“Marriage?” she asked quietly.
“Yeah, I’m getting married.” I said, smiling. I bent down and hugged her
gently.
“So fast..” she whispered under her breath. She closed her eyes and bit her
bottom lip.
“I would love for you to come.” I said, still holding my dress in my hands. “I
need you there.”
She just looked at me and smiled again. I yelled for my mom and she helped
Olivia’s mom out of the wheelchair and into the limo. The driver packed her chair in
the back. Olivia’s mom held my hand the whole way there. She kept looking at me,
and once, before we got there, I heard her whisper, “My little girl.”

[trayi52]

How sweet! I can just see it....

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I've been working on that, using enough imagery to make my stories more interesting. Glad it worked!

[trayi52]

Well it has worked, I already know what they all look like in my mind, I love reading! I have always loved reading. Better than any movie is the one you have in your own brain when you are reading. The good thing about reading, you can let the persons look like whomever you want! That is the greatest thing about reading, you know what they are thinking. Now isn't that better than any movie?

Willie

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Cool. Glad you like my story lol

[trayi52]

Now on with the story, get that brain going! Mine is waiting to turn the page.......

[Tweety_Pie]

MORE STORY! :D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

More coming soon!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Finally we arrived at the chruch. While I paced around in the lobby, my mom
took Olivia’s mom to her seat in the front of the church. Eliza came in next, looking
so beautiful. We saw each other and hugged.
“You look wonderful.” Eliza practically whispered. She looked me over the
same way Olivia’s mom had.
“Kersey? Ready?” my dad asked.
“Yep. Go Eliza!” I said. She grabbed Graham’s friend Noah’s arm and within
seconds they were preceeding down the aisle.
Everything was exactly how I dreamed it would be. I had a major case of
nervousness. My stomach fluttered with butterflies as I stood next to my father, hand
in hand, ready to walk down the aisle.
The doors reopened. Now it was my turn to take the long walk down the aisle.

[Tweety_Pie]

MORE MORE MORE :D! I love this story so much!

[katienoonan]

Okay I just read all 30 pages of this. I must say Im adicted! Hey wouldn't it be interesting if the baby's name was Jeremy? hmmm. What about Katie or Robert hehehe. Very well written, Im impressed now lets get on with it! I NEED to know what happens next!!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I don't know how much I will post today... :(

:(

[G.P.girl]

Originally posted by ILoveMyAbbyGirl
I don't know how much I will post today... :(

:(
WHY?????
p.s. Name The Baby Rex! ;)

[Tweety_Pie]

Originally posted by ILoveMyAbbyGirl
I don't know how much I will post today... :(

:(

It's ok Meg.... Don't worry. You can post some tomorrow :) We don't mind!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Well... I think I can post some more.. I'm feeling up to it. Did you hear what happened? Or just sensing somethings wrong? lol

[trayi52]

Don't let there be anything wrong, oh no not on her wedding day!!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I know, I'm so sorry I disappointed you guys today. I'm trying to work on some right now. :(

[trayi52]

Your okay! Don't worry!! We are still here waiting! Take your time.:)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Gavin's over right now... I'll type some up once he's asleep.

PS... to those of you who know, she just told me some more bad news... *sigh*

[Tweety_Pie]

Meg, take your time. Write the story whenever your comfortable.. Sorry to hear there is more bad news.

[Kfamr]

Bad news??:confused:

[apcrs5122]

Oh, Meg, more bad stuff?:( I'm so sorry. If it's ok with Megan, you guys can PM me or IM me (AIM screen name: racinbarrels100). Or if she is comfortable, she can do it herself. If not....:( Take your time Megan, we're here for you.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I'm doing okay. I'm typing now. Sorry I've been taking so long.

[apcrs5122]

Don't be sorry Megan, you're going through stuff.

I'm just an IM away....:)

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Originally posted by apcrs5122
I'm just an IM away....:)

Thanks Dayna. :)

I'm still worried about my other friend... I haven't heard from her all day (ticosmyham). :(

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Finally. Here's a piece guys.

The doors reopened. Now it was my turn to take the long walk down the aisle.
We marched quietly and slowly, as the wedding song was played. I looked up
and saw Graham at the altar. Everything about him was perfect. He was wearing a
beautiful black tuxedo. He was almost angelic.
We reached the end of the altar and my dad kissed the top of my head. I
remember him doing it that way when I was a kid. I walked up to Graham at the altar.
He had tears in the corners of his eyes.
“You look so beautiful.” he whispered.
“You too.” I whispered back. The priest recited the vows and Graham and I
repeated after him. The whole time, Graham just kept smiling at me.
“I now give you...” the priest began.
“Mr. and Mrs. Graham Koplin.” The church erupted with applause. Graham
and I kissed and made our way through the swarming crowd of people to the
awaiting limo outside.

[apcrs5122]

It's good Megan! What's the baby's name going to be?

*Camile* or *Camilia* (my Spanish name that I picked out;)):D

[katienoonan]

I'm dying to know what happens next. This is the one of the only stories that has kept my attention this long.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I'm glad you like it!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

More coming today. I hope. :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad:

[Dogz]

I still like the name Ellie. ;)

Can't wait to read some more!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Oy! Need to work on this, don't I?

[trayi52]

*Smack Megan up side the head* Yes you do!!! Remember your like my little girl so I will treat you as such!
Willie

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

*smacks back*

Tomorrow... I promise!

[trayi52]

Thats my girl!!!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

:D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Here's some!


Then


Hope you liked!

[trayi52]

*slaps Megan up side the head again* :D :p

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Want more?

Then we went

How's that?

*smacks Willie again*

:D You know I love you... lol

[trayi52]

*Smack Megan again* you know this could get very painful, and you have finals Wednesday!!!;) :p

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

*losing brain cells*

Why aren't you on MSN missie? lol

*smack*

[trayi52]

Going now!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

*pats Willie nicely on head*

Good girl! :D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Add me Willie...

[email protected]

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Alright... I'm working on it now!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“Mr. and Mrs. Graham Koplin.” The church erupted with applause. Graham
and I kissed and made our way through the swarming crowd of people to the
awaiting limo outside.
We practically fell into the limo. People behind us were cheering, screaming
and some were even crying.
“See you there!” Graham yelled through the roof of the limo. I had never seen
him so happy. He crawled back through the roof window and sat down. He looked at
me.
“You are... so... beautiful.” he said quietly. He took my hand in his and gave it
a light squeeze.
“I was speechless when I saw you coming down the aisle. You looked like an
angel.” he said. He laughed and rubbed his teary eyes.
“You did too.” I said, laughing and giving him a hug.
“I’m so happy.” he said. He smiled and grabbed my hand and held it in his
the whole way to the ballroom. That’s right where I wanted to stay; locked in his arms
forever.
“Ready to tell everyone the news?” he asked. I gave him a pained look.
“What’s the matter? Aren’t you happy?” he asked me, looking concerned.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

bump

[trayi52]

Okay we are still here reading, and waiting for more! I tried to pm you, and your box is full! *slaps Megan up side the head*

[Tweety_Pie]

more!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“Ready to tell everyone the news?” he asked. I gave him a pained look.
“What’s the matter? Aren’t you happy?” he asked me, looking concerned.
“I’m just wondering if it’s too soon, Graham. I am twenty. Twenty!” I cried. “We
have our whole lives ahead of us. What are we going to be able to do with a baby
around?”
“It’s called a babysitter. It will be okay, Kersey. You will love this baby and so
will I.” Graham said, grabbing my hand again.
“I hope no ones mad.” I said, looking out the window, biting my lip.
“They won’t. And if they are, we can do it ourselves.” he said, confidently. I
closed my eyes. Do it ourselves. That seemed like a lot of work. Graham eased me
back and I layed on his chest the whole way to the reception. He kissed my
forehead and told me it would be alright. Again, I felt that emotion wash away all my
fears of becoming a first time mom. I knew he was right.
When we arrived, everyone else was already there. We walked in and the
crowd stood and applauded.
“Kersey and Graham Koplin!!” The man on stage yelled. This only made the
crowd cheer louder. Graham and I walked through the opening in the group of
people to the middle of the dancefloor. Graham walked up to the announcer on the
stage and took the microphone.
“Well guys, I believe we have an announcement to make. Will my mom and
dad come up here along with Kersey’s parents?” he asked, looking around the
room for them. Within seconds, both pairs emerged from the crowd. They walked up
and stood in front of us, completely puzzled. Graham put his arm around his parents
shoulders and my mother held my hand. She mouthed something to me, but I wasn’t
paying attention.
“Well. We have a very important announcement to make to everyone in this
room, but especially our parents.” Graham said. “Ladies and gentlemen, please,
allow me to introduce, Grandma and Grandpa Koplin and Grandma and Grandpa
Yearling.” he said, unsteadily.
It took a few seconds for it to sink in. I heard a few gasps, then my mom
looked at me.
“A baby?” she asked. The tone of her voice sounded disgusted.
“Congratulations!” My dad yelled, hugging me. I focused my eyes back on my
mom. She had turned away and was walking back to her table. My dad looked and
me and hugged me again.
“Don’t worry about your mother.” he said, then walked after her.
Graham’s parents on the other hand, were ecstatic. Graham’s mom was
crying, and his dad was close to tears too.
“A grandbaby!” his mom cried, jumping up and down. Graham was pure
smiles.

[Tweety_Pie]

omg i love this story! more!

[trayi52]

Great, keep on!! This is just getting better and better!

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

“A grandbaby!” his mom cried, jumping up and down. Graham was pure smiles.
Graham looked over at me and must have seen the saddened expression on my
face. He gave the mic back and came over to me.
“What’d they say?” he asked, putting his hand on my arm. I said it plain and
simple.
“My mom doesn’t want a baby.” I wasn’t going to let this ruin my wedding day.
“Ready to dance?” I asked. Graham must have read my mind because he asked no
further questions.
I avoided my mother the whole night. We got no pictures taken with each
other. The few times she did approach me, I either walked away or got into a crowd
where she couldn’t reach me. Everyone else that night congratulated me.
Graham and I danced our slow dance together. It was our song, called “In
These Arms”. It was so romantic, and I admit it, I cried. Graham and I danced, so
perfectly, my head against his chest, and over and over again he told me how much
he loved me. And that’s all that mattered.

[Tweety_Pie]

more more more! :D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

More coming soon.

[trayi52]

Oh Please Megan, want more story! I am still waiting for me to show up! *walking around on knees begging* I wonder why my knees hurt so bad!!

Granny Willie

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Yay! You're back! *smack*

How was your day?

[trayi52]

Well I was sleepy, until somebody just smacked me up side the head! *Smack*:p

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

I'm sleepy too.

*gets blankie and teddy bear*

[trayi52]

Excuse me Megan, but I think that is my teddy bear!! Give me my teddy bear back!! * Smack*

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

*starts to cry*

MEANIE!

[trayi52]

Heres your teddy bear back baby.. Sweet little Megan, take you a little nap..

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

*collapses on the floor*

*insanely tired*

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

Oh.. Here!

The night passed very quickly. Before we knew it, it was two in the morning and
people were leaving. Graham and I sat down on some fold up chairs against the
wall.
“How was it?” Graham asked.
“Wonderful.” I said smiling.
“No. Really tell me how you feel about your mom’s baby comment Kersey. I
know you wouldn’t take it that easily.” he said propping his elbows on his knees,
ready to listen.
“I don’t know. If she can’t accept it, then she can do whatever she wants.” I
said to him. “I don’t care about her.”
Graham just sat there, maybe pondering what I had just said. He reached
over and kissed me and helped me up.
We got in the limo and people were still honking at us. My dad waved at me
through the window of his car. I waved back and blew him a kiss. My mother didn’t
even look at me.

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

bump

*goes back to sleep*

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

*bumpers*

[G.P.girl]

Bad Mommy!!! more pplease:D

[ILoveMyAbbyGirl]

SOMEONE'S alive!! SHEESH! Where's Willie? We need to wake her...