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05-25-2001, 06:49 PM
I made this poem today in Langauge Arts class.

It is called a sence poem.

I see the sad faced canines
as I walk by.
I smell the fresch puppy breath
as they are afraid under that chest of fur.
I hear all the frightning barks
as they are awaiting that day.
I feel all week inside because they do not deserve to live this way.
I taste the fright inside as they play.
I think that one day oh one day they will be able to happily play.

This poem is dedicated to my Blinky Boy.
For one day it will become his day and he will get a great home that he deserves.



05-25-2001, 07:19 PM
Great poem KayAnn.. I'm sure Blink will find a great home soon http://PetoftheDay.com/talk/smile.gif

05-25-2001, 09:11 PM
Very well done BaSim! It says quite a bit in just a few words. Hope you got an A+ for that. We all have our fingers and paws crossed for Blinky.

05-25-2001, 09:26 PM
Basim, that was a really nice poem, it said it all. That has to be good for an A.

05-25-2001, 09:46 PM
BaSim, that's a lovely poem! The purpose of poetry is to express feelings in a very special way. As I read your poem, feelings about the dogs' situation came flooding in...so you get an A from me.

05-25-2001, 10:38 PM
Beautiful, BaSim!!!! It says it all. You deserve an A+!