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    this is so sad!!

    this poem is so sad i cried.. and you'll probally cry too!!He Will Come


    Don't close the door
    Don't push me away
    Why are you leaving?
    Don't make me stay.

    Slow down the car
    I can't keep up
    This pavement is hot
    and my pads are cut.

    I've got to quit running
    or my heart will pop
    Every muscle is aching
    why didn't you stop?

    I'm so hungry and thirsty
    Darkness is near
    But I shouldn't leave
    He will come for me here.

    Several weeks have passed
    I'm dead on my feet
    They call me a nuisance
    because I eat off the streets.

    Every car that passes
    I chase it to see
    If it is my master
    coming for me.

    Though I approach
    those that come near
    With trust in my eyes
    and no sign of fear

    With hate in their voices
    and a cold, heartless stare
    They threaten to kill me
    They don't even care

    Batter my body
    with rocks that they throw
    I will not leave
    He will come, don't you know?

    Overtaken with weakness
    my body is numb
    I'm sick and so lonely
    Oh please, let him come!

    I will go back
    to where he first threw me out
    I'll wait for him there
    He will come, no doubt.

    My thoughts are fading
    My chest feels like lead
    I'm sleepy, so sleepy
    I can't lift my head.

    It's so quiet, so peaceful
    all remains still
    There is my master
    at my home on the hill.

    Yes, I can see him
    He's calling my name
    His voice is so gentle
    His hands are the same

    He decided he wants me
    Things will be fine
    I really do love him
    that master of mine.

    My tail wags with pleasure,
    I can't catch my breath.
    He came in my dreams
    but so did my death.

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    Mel, that poem did have me in tears. It is so true. How can anyone do this to the poor innocents that love them so much? I shed tears for those who had to go through that by the hands of someone they loved and trusted. I must go hug my rescued furpups and thank goodness that I have them.

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    I, too, was in tears when I read that. Thank God it's the lunch hour and nobody was around. When I get home, I'm going to give that big loof Patience of mine a big hug. I am so thankful I found her running along the road and we have a happy ending, much different than the ending of the poem.
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    so sad

    So sad,although so real
    It remains me a book that I read a couple of years before and I highly recommend,it's: Timbuktu by Paul Auster(Henry Hold and Co,Inc,Hard Cover).Is about a homeless and his dog.


    Koxka

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    That poem is one of the saddest I've ever read.

    It so truly reflects the feeling of fear and confusion that
    a "dumped "dog must feel. Every human that it ever
    love or trusted is gone and they are totally alone in a
    world where no one cares.. What makes it even worse
    is that the dog never gives up hope that his people will
    come back for him. Heartbreaking .

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    I must mention that I read this poem in the morning and I am STILL haunted by the memory. It is one of the most heartwrenching poems I have ever read. I can't stop the tears.
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    Sue

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    i know!! i still feel pain from reading that poem~~

    i vuluteer with a vet and today a dog came in.. a puppy found astray couldn't wlak or eat.. sadly she did'nt make it..
    but others can.. don't wait.. YOU can make a differnece

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    whimper

    That is so sad. It makes me think of my poor Addie-girl. She was rescued, just in time. That poem could have been her. Addie was 3.5 months old and nothing but skin and bones, living on the streets. I couldn't read the whole thing. I wish we could help all the poor animals.

    whimper

    I'm going to give Addie an extra big hug tonight.



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    Pupper! Addie and Jake are gorgeous!! So glad Addie found you to love her!!

    Sue
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    That is one of the saddest poems I've ever read. It must be just how all homeless animals feel

    Huney, Bon & Simba-missed so very much
    Remembering all the Rainbow Bridge Pets

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