View Poll Results: What do you think of it so far?

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  • I love it.

    15 42.86%
  • It's okay, could be better written.

    2 5.71%
  • It's to gory. Why would you write something like this?

    2 5.71%
  • It's awesome and well-written.

    11 31.43%
  • Don't quit your day job, kid. Go back to pet stories.

    5 14.29%
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Thread: Another Story... =P

  1. #271
    Please just let us know who it was and we won't bother you for the rest of the night. Please? * tear*



    It was a friend from the medical center!

    I know it! I know it!

    Can I be a character in the story?

  2. #272
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    Yeah i bet it was eliza!

  3. #273
    I bet it was too!

  4. #274
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    *bump*

    more?? please?
    ~Chelsea~

  5. #275
    Where are you ILuvMyAbbyGirl?

  6. #276
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    i think she's abandoning this story! more please!

  7. #277
    Um, I've actually read more of the story now, I like your writing, I like the storyline - for the most part..No offence, but some of it doesn't make a lot of sense..like the anorexia part..You make it seem like tons of people die from it..when they don't. It's rare, thankfully, that people die. Unless the girls parents were totally uninvolved and uncaring they would notice before she was at the point she was going to die. They could come close, need hospitalization for weeks to months, but is unlikely they die...



    My babies: Josie, Zeke, Kiba, Shadow (AKA Butter)

  8. #278
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    why aren't you writing more?? i wanna know what happens!

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    *Bump*

    what happens next??
    ~Chelsea~

  10. #280
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    Hey good story, how about writing some more.

    Did you write the story on your homepage about Ari? That was very good, I want to read it to my grandchildren, they will love it.

    But please do write some more, it is very good. I can see you being published one of these days. Keep it up, and I am not kidding.

    Quit making us wait so long!!

    Thank You, kittycats_delight for my new siggy!!!

  11. #281
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    Oh by the way, this cutting that this young girl was doing, do young people really do this? Why do they do that? I have never heard of that, I have an 18 year old and I have never heard her talk about that.

    That is a scary thought, if that is really happening with our young people.

    You are a good writer, and to think I have passed this thread up so many times. Now I am like these young ladies, waiting for your next chapter. LOL. Go Girl!!!

    Thank You, kittycats_delight for my new siggy!!!

  12. #282
    yes, alot of young girls and boys do cuttings.. Im not really sure why, but i think it might because they are stressed, mad, or depressed. Im not sure but there are people out there who do it.
    It's Scary...

  13. #283
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    Amber, how long has this kind of thing been going on, I just wonder if it happening where I live. Guess I need to have a talk with my daughter and see if it is happening in her school. I know of some of her friends that gag themselves just so they can loose weight. I know some of these girls personally, and I have always tried to help these girls in someway.

    Well I am rambling, I just cannot get that out of my mind that this is something really happening to young people, Oh my god!!!

    Thanks for telling me about this Amber.

    Thank You, kittycats_delight for my new siggy!!!

  14. #284
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    i think kids cut everywhere, but maybe more in someplaces more than others. like in schools where it's condidered "cool". alot of kids do it just because thats what all the 'cool' kids do and they want to fit in.



    p.s. waiting to hear more story!!!

  15. #285
    Your Welcome, Im not so sure when it happened, but it happens everywhere.

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