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  • I love it.

    15 42.86%
  • It's okay, could be better written.

    2 5.71%
  • It's to gory. Why would you write something like this?

    2 5.71%
  • It's awesome and well-written.

    11 31.43%
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Thread: Another Story... =P

  1. #106
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    Graham was waiting for me outside the bathroom. He must have saw me go in.
    "Hey. Just wondering... wanna go to supper with me now?" he asked. I regained my normal heart rate and smiled.
    "Sure." I said. He reached for my hand and looked at my wrist.
    "What did you do?" he cried.
    I looked down. The blood had seeped through my sleeve.
    "Nothing." I said and kept walking. He ran to catch up with me again.
    "Kersey you cannot do that." he said. "Promise me you won't." It was the same thing I had heard from Jeremy. It brought back too many memories.
    "Just stop!" I cried. "I don't want to talk about it." I said and turned around and went to my room and slammed the door.

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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

  2. #107
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    Oh it's so good!

    thanks macky
    I love you Chaser

  3. #108
    This is such a great story! I can't stop reading, what happens next?

  4. #109
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    I collapsed on my bed and cried for almost 10 minutes before I realized Emma was in the room with me.
    "Can I ask?" she asked me.
    "No. Don't talk to me." I cried. She herself even brought back memories of Jeremy. I heard a knock on the door and Emma went to answer it. I wasn't in the mood for company, even if it was Eliza, or Graham even. I didn't want to be bothered.
    "Just a sec." I heard Emma say. That usually meant, 'Let me go see if Kersey wants to talk to you or not.' Great.
    "Kers, it's Graham." she said.
    "I'm busy." I said, rolling over so he couldn't see me crying. She went back over to the door and a few seconds later, the door closed. I closed my eyes and went to sleep.

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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

  5. #110
    And then what happened? This is a great story! Keep it coming!

  6. #111
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    Wow, what a twist! Whats gonna happen next! Thats a really good thing about this story you cant really PREDICT whats gonna
    happening next! this is so good...more please
    [size=1]Rachel & Sally



  7. #112
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    I awoke and looked at my alarm clock. It said 11:30. Emma was alseep in her bed and so was Eliza. I quietly climbed out of bed and opened the door. I stood in the hallway and looked both ways. I wasn't supposed to be out of bed right now, and if I got caught I would get in trouble. I couldn't be within nurse range for a while, to avoid my new scar showing.
    I walked to the pitch black rec room and sat on the sofa. I pulled my knees up to my chest and looked out the window. I saw nothing but the moon and the leave-less trees blowing in the wind. I closed my eyes and I realized, once again, I was crying and didn't notice it.
    I closed my eyes again and must have drifted off into a very light sleep. I woke up when I felt someone put their arm around me. I gasped, and looked to my side, but I couldn't see anything because it was so dark.
    "Kersey, it's me." the mysterious voice whispered. It was Graham.
    "What are you doing up?" I asked.
    "Thinking about you." he said. "I'm worried." he said, running his fingers through my hair.
    I didn't know what to say; I was speechless. Then he leaned over and kissed me. It was almost magical. Then we heard a window break.

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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

  8. #113
    WW! What happens next?

  9. #114
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    yes.. what dies () happen next..




  10. #115
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    Are you telling me you want Graham DEAD???!!!???



    Amber!! lol YOU LOVE HIM!

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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

  11. #116
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    Yes.. Yes i do..

    EW me like graham? WHAT ARE YOU CRAZY?!?

    *cheers* GO jeremy!

    We will finish this in the story disscusion!

  12. #117
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    I looked out the large bay window in front of us. A masked person had broken the window and was carrying a knife. I screamed, alerting the nurses. Nurses emerged from everywhere, someone was screaming "Call the police! Call the police!" Someone pulled a firealarm, and soon everyone was scrambling around in the hallway to see what was going on.
    The masked person pushed over chairs, knocked over our foos-ball table, and finally their eyes landed on me and Graham, frozen to the couch.
    "Kersey, MOVE!" Graham screamed, pulling me up and pushing me towards the nurses. The nurses shoved me to the back of the crowd, fearing that I was the target. I pushed my way to the front again and saw Graham and the intruder having a stand off. The intruder was swinging the knife all over the place, a few times skimming the edge of Graham's arms.
    "Graham, be CAREFUL!" I screamed, tears pouring down my face. A few of the nurses alerted everyone to go back to their rooms. Eliza and Emma pulled me away from the crowd and pulled me into the room. Everyone was told to lock their doors and windows.
    I was histerical. I heard cops yelling and nurses yelling. It was horrible. I finally gave up and went to the door and peeked out.
    The cops had handcuffed the man, after they had pulled his mask off. I saw his face and collapsed onto the floor in tears.

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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

  13. #118

    (I think I might know who it is! Post some more!)

  14. #119
    Originally posted by Dogz

    (I think I might know who it is! Post some more!)
    Me too!

    Keep going.........I'm reading..........

  15. #120
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    I know your evil plan meg!! CANT HIDE IT FROM ME!!

    -mutters- evil evil..

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