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Thread: Another Story... =P

  1. #61
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    Originally posted by ILoveMyAbbyGirl
    My parents hugged me and left, and the nurse, whose name was Julie
    My name was used!! Hehe.

    It's really good so far! I thought it was a *little* too much in the begining though...but it's coming along great!

  2. #62
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    i need more!!!!

  3. #63
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    We had a lot in common, it was neat. We went back in after walking around the perimeter a few times. I rubbed my hands together to warm then up. It was a little chilly out, I should have grabbed some mittens. Then Graham reached over and grabbed my hands.
    "To warm them up." he said, smiling at me. We held hands all the way to the rec room and decided to part before everyone saw. He winked at me and waved as we went our seperate ways. I could tell my face was red. But I loved it.



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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

  4. #64
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    OMG! poor jeremy!

  5. #65
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    Uh oh... What about Jeremy!
    [size=1]Rachel & Sally



  6. #66
    Jeremey?? what about him? Its getten good!!

  7. #67
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    I guess it was because I had never really felt that certain sign of affection. Jeremy hugged me, but it just felt different when Graham did it. I told Eliza all about it that night.
    "But Kersey! You have Jeremy!" she shrieked, but she was excited for me.
    "I know, but I don't think we are technically going out." I said. Maybe we were, I just needed an excuse.
    As always, Jeremy came over the next day and I couldn't help but feel bad about what I had done. We stayed in my room for most of the time, Eliza politely let me have it for the hour or two he would be here. He kissed my cheek, and I felt my face turn red. I felt really bad.
    We heard a knock on the door. My heart skipped a beat.
    "I'll get it." I said, jumping up to prevent him from answering it. I knew it was Graham. He came and the same time everyday.
    I opened the door and there he stood, in his jacket. It was time for our walk.
    "I can't right now, Graham." I whispered. "Jeremy's here." I said. Graham looked shattered. He didn't even say anything, he just took off his gloves and walked away.
    I went back over to Jeremy.
    "Who was it?" He asked. I felt it was time to tell him the truth.
    "Graham." I said casually.
    "What did he want?" he asked, saying ''he'' like it was a dirty word.
    "It was time for our walk. We take walks together in the afternoon." I said. Jeremy then told me he had to go and left with a harsh "Goodbye," and left my room.

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    now she's slowly opening
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  8. #68
    This is getting exciting!
    MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE!

  9. #69
    Originally posted by Dogz
    This is getting exciting!
    MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE!
    YEAH!!

  10. #70
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    MORE PLEASE!!!

    this is getting really exciting!
    [size=1]Rachel & Sally



  11. #71
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    Are you ready???

    Are you really really ready???

    It's getting exciting... wait till you see what happens next...


    Are you SURE; ABSOLUTELY POSITIVE; you are ready?

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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

  12. #72
    YES! WE ARE READY!!!!

  13. #73
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    Alright... Here goes nuthin'...
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    I sat on my bed. I was torn between Graham and Jeremy. I layed in bed for almost an hour when I heard another knock on the door.
    "Who is it?" I asked, not moving.
    "Eliza. Can I come in?" she asked.
    "It's your room too, Liza." I said, smiling into my pillow.
    She came in and sat next to me. "I saw Jeremy leave. He looked angry. Is everything okay?" she asked. The truth was, he was acting more like Chad everytime I saw him.
    "I guess. I'm fine." I said, rolling over to face her. "It's just that I can't even have guy friends now that we're together." I said.
    "He'll get over it. If he doesn't, he isn't for you." She said. She shrugged and left.
    I closed my eyes. I hadn't eaten for a while, and I thought it was time to eat. I got up and stretched and put on my slippers. My feet were really cold. I heard another knock on the door.
    "Eliza?" I asked, puzzled.
    "No, it's me." the voice said. It was Graham.
    "Come in." I said, nervously. He came in, now without his jacket and gloves. He sat next to me on my bed.
    "Sorry I couldn't come with you." I said. I realized I was fidgeting with my hands. I only did that when I was really nervous.
    "It's alright. I should have known." he said. He looked up at the ceiling then down to me. "Eliza told me Jeremy looked angry when he left, is everything okay?" he asked. He was concerned. I loved that.
    "I guess. He just acts more and more like Chad everyday." I said, shaking my head.
    "Chad?" he asked.
    "Chad is my ex-boyfriend. He raped me about four or five months ago." I said. I really didn't want to talk about it.
    "Oh wow, Kersey, I'm sorry." he said.
    "Yeah, let's not talk about it." I said. "I'm a little hungry, wanna go eat?" I asked him.
    "Yeah, one sec." he said. I wondered what he was going to do. I stood up and stretched again, waiting for whatever he needed to do. He stood up and...

    I'll make you wait.

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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

  14. #74
    WHAT WHAT WHAT????????? TELLLL!!!!

  15. #75
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    Oh, you want me to tell? *yawns*

    *looks at the story highlighted in another window... should I? NAH!*

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    now she's slowly opening
    new eyes.

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