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Thread: A new Story, im writing..

  1. #46
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    I'M YOUR NUMBER 2 FAN!!!

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    I knew you were gonna write that HAHA
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  3. #48
    More STORY!!
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  4. #49
    PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
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    Alright here i am!

    I had my head stuck to the window, watching outside, hoping maybe i could sneak out or something.. We pulled up to Kid Orphanage of Society.. I got out of the car, it was pouring rain now.. I walked up the steps, The paramedic behind me with my stuff, "Normally it isn't my duty to bring you here but..." "Then why did you?" I asked.. "I want to stay home, at my house" "It will be better for you here, you will meet new people, my mom even works here, she will help you like your own mother.." I sighed and looked up at the sign.. Kid Orphanage of Society.. What a great name.. I walked in, i was cold from the rain.. My hair was dripping and my shoes were squeaking.. I walked up to the desk, looking behind me to make sure the paramedic had my things.. "Hi, im new here, um.. Im Jamie.." "Hello jamie! Nice to have a new face here! This is my daugter Lynn.." She waved, i smiled and waved back.. "Sweetie, ill get all the information from this man here, Lynn show her to her new room.." She waved for me to come with her, and i followed..

  6. #51
    MORE MORE MORE
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  7. #52
    More please!!!
    Dayna, Alex, Phoebe, Cleo, Rolo, Scooter, & Holly

    Thank you so much Popcornbird!

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    I love stories! MORE MORE MORE!! Its interesting. If it were a book I wouldnt be able to put it down!

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    Aw Thanks so much!

    Alright here is a little update, im starving!

    I Followed her up 3 long flights of steps, having to carry my own suitcase because the paramedic was down telling the lady "My terrible tradegy" It was so nice here, the hallways were a golden brown color, with all the windows the color shimmered off onto the doors.. The door knobs were brass, and curled at the tips to make a little spiral ending.. Lynn turned to me and talked (for the first time, might i add) smiled and said, "I think you will like this room, when i was here i did.." She winked at me and opened the door, i stood in amazement.. I was in heaven, i really was!

    Ah guys, is it getting boring?

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    Of course its not boring!!! MORE!!!
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  11. #56
    Not boring at all! More story! It's really good
    Dayna, Alex, Phoebe, Cleo, Rolo, Scooter, & Holly

    Thank you so much Popcornbird!

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    I WILL DO ANYTHING FOR MORE

    This story is AMAZING!
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    C'mon!! We need more!! It's not boring at all. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

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    Omg, i forgot about this!

    I stared at the bed, it was better than my own! This bed was round and had curtains draped over.. The walls were a dark almond color and their were windows upon windows.. Lynn grinned at me.. I grinned back.. "Like it?" she said.. I shook my head, "I would be crazy not to!" I laughed and ran into my new home.. I was holding back my tears, realizing i had no mom.. Im in an orphanage, and all i can do was be happy? How was that? I sat on my bed.. Lynn laughed "Ill be downstairs! I live only a few rooms down, me and my mother stay here, its out home.. So feel free to drop in, and ill do the same.." I smiled.. "Sure.." She closed my door, and uh oh, the tears flowed.. I miss my mom.. I miss MY home.. Knock, knock.. "Come in.. I looked up to the door.. It was the paramedic.. "I just wanted to give you these" He handed me my bags.. "Ill keep in touch.." I nodded, "Ok".. He closed the door, and i got up and got my bags.. I unpacked for awhile, Putting things on bookshelves and so, knock, knock..

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    *runs into a bush and starts crying* How could you forget!?
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